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[aid] => mick
[title] => after the rain
[time] => 2008-07-10 18:33:32
[hometext] => ~as i wonder why i'm here...
[bodytext] =>
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some flowers in the picture
'cause it seems the thing to do
to show some beauty in the soul
some red, green, purple and blue,
whilst sitting under my umbrella
true love will always be the rain
dogs at feet and glass in hand, i
know sun'l come around again,
garden harmony as angels sing
in forms and murmurs of feathers
lillies, morning glories, moonflowers
colour brightness brought by weather,
i used to dream of a star lighted stream
nature does not lie with kisses
awake i am, 'tis not a dream
so i fall face first into love.
§* *§
*|*
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[score] => 35
[ratings] => 7
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after the rain
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 06:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
some flowers in the picture
'cause it seems the thing to do
to show some beauty in the soul
some red, green, purple and blue,
whilst sitting under my umbrella
true love will always be the rain
dogs at feet and glass in hand, i
know sun'l come around again,
garden harmony as angels sing
in forms and murmurs of feathers
lillies, morning glories, moonflowers
colour brightness brought by weather,
i used to dream of a star lighted stream
nature does not lie with kisses
awake i am, 'tis not a dream
so i fall face first into love.
§* *§
*|*
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Re: after the rain
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 09:42:07 PM AEST
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I have missed your posts. Great write.
Deadwriter
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Re: after the rain
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 05:30:06 AM AEST
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Beautifull,
You go girlfriend.
it's really good to hear this comming from you, my long time friend.
Huggs, smiles, luv,
emy
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Re: after the rain
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by spooky on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 09:29:49 AM AEST
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beautiful thoughts of one,,well written,,
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: after the rain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 11:02:32 AM AEST
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Great write my old friend, I too am back.
It is nice to see a post from you as I have always loved your writes............Mike |
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Re: after the rain
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 12:19:35 PM AEST
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beautifully written paints a lovely picture
hugs
Shari |
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Re: after the rain
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 12:30:54 PM AEST
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Nessa,
this sounds like heaven to me, you painted a beautiful picture with your words. I am so glad you graced us with you!!
hugs n woofies
Michelle |
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Re: after the rain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 01:56:36 PM AEST
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Nessa, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN????
I'm so glad you popped in with this beautiful image-filled piece.
I would love to slip inside this poem and just drift off into a most
peaceful slumber. "nature does not lie with kisses"--- omigosh!!
What could be more profound or poetic than that?
G O R G E O U S !!
So glad that you shared it with us, hun. =)
*hugs and wishes for happiness*
~Breezy
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Re: after the rain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th July 2008 @ 06:01:58 AM AEST
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So the sun shines again...
Beautiful. |
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Re: after the rain
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 10:52:33 PM AEST
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| Nessa, your sweetness shines thru on this beauty, a great way to bring in morning, Luvs and hugs, Valerie |
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Re: after the rain
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 10:52:35 PM AEST
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| Nessa, your sweetness shines thru on this beauty, a great way to bring in morning, Luvs and hugs, Valerie |
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Re: after the rain
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 08:28:12 AM AEST
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Dear sweet lady Nessa~ It has been way too long since I visited your glorious pages dear friend and look at how much I have missed out on. Your work is sensational and you always deliver the most beautifully crafted masterpieces to grace our poetic hearts with. Descriptive, eloquent and mesmerizing as is all your work. Well done dearest Nessa~
love n hugs,
Sue M |
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Re: after the rain
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:41:09 AM AEST
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this is absolutely STUNNING!!
well done!!!!!
--Katie |
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Re: after the rain
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 12:04:36 PM AEST
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beautifully done, great post...
wiz |
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Re: after the rain
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by windowguy on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 10:28:09 AM AEST
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| Enjoyed reading this. It has a peaceful ambiance. |
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Re: after the rain
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 07:12:41 AM AEST
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HI Nessa,
This poem is perfect,and captures that feeling I have when sitting under my cedar tree watching my chickens peck. There is a Whitman simplicity to life found in this piece. I adore it. |
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Re: after the rain
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by colinb on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 01:29:39 AM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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Re: after the rain
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 10th November 2014 @ 12:15:49 PM AEST
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Excellent expression from beginning to end...So poetic and bursting with feeling. I absolutely adore this line:
True love will always be the rain...
Wonderful.
~Scorp |
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