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Reckless Heartbeat

Contributed by Oceandreamer on Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 02:30:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Within the raging storms of your heart,
the undercurrents of your soul;
your deepest feelings come alive…
your fantasies take control.

Raw emotions and passions flair,
as your darkest secrets dissolve into thin air.
You Wild Child…
what you resist will persist,
within the mysteries of your soul.

With your reckless heartbeat,
you will surrender…
for light and dark co-exists,
within the undercurrents of your soul.
Roaring thunder…
lighting up the sky,
as your animal passions come alive…




Copyright © Oceandreamer ... [ 2008-07-09 02:30:03]
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Re: Reckless Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 03:54:15 AM AEST
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Ahh.. I loved the raw passion I felt when I read this... Good work...
Jenni


Re: Reckless Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 09:59:54 AM AEST
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Oh, OD, this had a mysterious feel to it, coupled by a hint of sensuality.

Devilishly delicious!

I especially love the last stanza, in particular the last line. There is such
a freedom that awaits inside of wild abandon, no?

Great post! Wonderfully enjoyable.

~Breezy



Re: Reckless Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 12:30:57 PM AEST
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Ash...........simply ... beautifully through and through..

Gave all raw emotions , one could give. They should fall deep for this.


brew~


Re: Reckless Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 11:58:32 AM AEST
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Very passionate and the images are wildly vivid!


Re: Reckless Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 03:39:11 PM AEST
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Wow OceanDreamer~
This is so passionate and extremely well written.
Composed beautifully dear poet you leave lasting
images into your readers minds. Well done and
keep up the great work.
hugs,
Dreamer




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