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Each Day
Contributed by
Buggsy
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 02:38:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Leaping sunset flames;
Consume horizon and sky,
As the darkness grows.
Copyright ©
Buggsy
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2008-07-08 14:38:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Each Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 03:03:16 PM AEST (User
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Very beautiful write you do well with these
Michelle |
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Re: Each Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 04:07:37 AM AEST (User
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You have painted quite a glorious picture with these few words... Wonderful haiku....
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Re: Each Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 10:19:21 AM AEST (User
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in a word ...
G O R G E O U S !!
you captured the brilliance of a sunset so beautifully and
in so few words! Just that first line alone is outstanding!
Magnificent haiku!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Each Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 10:41:16 AM AEST (User
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i love a good haiku. and this was just perfect., teh glory of a sunets embers was encapsulated to a tee,
GREAT WORK |
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