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A perfect hill top view, of a romantic skew of lies
The streets below filled with tears and panic
A call to remember, but I love you was lost in the static
Is this what you’ve come to fear the most
The lonely drive home down the same empty road
Your radio reminding you your still alone
Laying your head down at night, with no one at your side
Waking to the torment of this silence
And a sun rise thats hidden behind the shadow of a concrete skyline

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Concrete Skyline

Contributed by sorrowsofabrokenheart on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 04:59:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

City lights steal the glory from the star lit sky
A perfect hill top view, of a romantic skew of lies
The streets below filled with tears and panic
A call to remember, but I love you was lost in the static
Is this what you’ve come to fear the most
The lonely drive home down the same empty road
Your radio reminding you your still alone
Laying your head down at night, with no one at your side
Waking to the torment of this silence
And a sun rise thats hidden behind the shadow of a concrete skyline

Copyright Â© sorrowsofabrokenheart ... [ 2008-07-07 16:59:23]
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Re: Concrete Skyline (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 06:51:34 PM AEST
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Very deep, awesome write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Concrete Skyline (User Rating: 1 )
by inlovewithaladd on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 10:02:41 PM AEST
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Your radio reminding you your still alone

loved that line.

Re: Concrete Skyline (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 10:07:25 PM AEST
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Loved this one!
I can totally relate to this poems...

I like the way you toss the reader about
with the interesting twists & contrast of emotions -
"A perfect hill top view, of a romantic skew of lies
The streets below filled with tears and panic"

Nice.... I like it!

~~Oceandreamer~~

Re: Concrete Skyline (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 01:41:21 AM AEST
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nicely done,

wiz

Re: Concrete Skyline (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 03:48:00 AM AEST
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Awesome write. The emotions that seep from your work are astounding and this all makes total sense. And one thing i have to say: the Jackhammer is one of Concrete's worst enemies. This is a great work and something i have to say is don't dwell, love will come: enjoy your time, be yourself, and love will come. Keep up the great work!

~sprints

Re: Concrete Skyline (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 07:10:36 AM AEST
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a good write like the images and the snicker at the side of your mouth

Re: Concrete Skyline (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 07:16:29 AM AEST
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Strong and vivid details and images in this write.
I loved the concrete skyline.
Beautiful work

Michelle

Re: Concrete Skyline (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 10:46:06 AM AEST
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I will have to say this for you - wow.

you have a beautifull use of imagery

--kevin
the lonely vagabond

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