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Deprived from the start of a Father's love,
Cause God took her Mother to his home above.
Blamed for the loss of his wife,
On the day she was brought into this life.

This little princess has been dealt a raw deal,
Many a day, she went without a meal.
Her dad, he ignored her pleas and her cries,
Making her so unhappy, underneath all his lies.

She hated her life, didn't want to go on living,
Pretty soon, her favours she started giving.
This soon led to a life on the street,
Never trusting anyone she did chance to meet.

Very soon, she had a princess of her own,
Inside of her, this precious child had grown.
Never would she allow, she vowed that day,
To let this child suffer, as she had in every way.

This child had become her salvation,
She began to live each day in anticipation,
Of a life filled with love, happiness and joy.
She even forgave her father...still a little boy.

Today, this woman has made a life for herself,
All her pain she has put on the shelf.
She lives now for her little princess,
Making sure both their lives will never go amiss.

~~^~~
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~Blamed From Birth~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 10:39:43 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

~~^~~

Deprived from the start of a Father's love,
Cause God took her Mother to his home above.
Blamed for the loss of his wife,
On the day she was brought into this life.

This little princess has been dealt a raw deal,
Many a day, she went without a meal.
Her dad, he ignored her pleas and her cries,
Making her so unhappy, underneath all his lies.

She hated her life, didn't want to go on living,
Pretty soon, her favours she started giving.
This soon led to a life on the street,
Never trusting anyone she did chance to meet.

Very soon, she had a princess of her own,
Inside of her, this precious child had grown.
Never would she allow, she vowed that day,
To let this child suffer, as she had in every way.

This child had become her salvation,
She began to live each day in anticipation,
Of a life filled with love, happiness and joy.
She even forgave her father...still a little boy.

Today, this woman has made a life for herself,
All her pain she has put on the shelf.
She lives now for her little princess,
Making sure both their lives will never go amiss.

~~^~~

Copyright © Jenni_K ... [ 2008-07-07 10:39:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 10:47:52 AM AEST
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Just beautiful Jenni

Although this is fiction - in many lives, this could be factual.

Nice write.

~Stephan

Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 12:33:42 PM AEST
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Incredible writing, girlfriend.
It's sad but I'm sure many out there can relate.
Awesome work.
huggs, peace, joy,
emy

Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 03:26:20 PM AEST
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mmm...it seems the hard times brings us strength within. I know my cousin's life could relate to this and i could see she does everything to make her 1 year old daughter/princess smile, since my cousin never really had a good relationship with her widowed mom. ty for this poem...
-K.Z.

Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 04:10:05 PM AEST
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this is a beatiful write. so insperational. loved it.

Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 09:48:53 PM AEST
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Bravo... Great write!
Thanks for sharing your work.
Keep writing...
~~Oceandreamer~~

Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 09:58:31 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful and inspiring poem. Excellent Job!

Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 03:35:07 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write and yes I do see it.
Michelle

Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 11:23:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Jenni.

Deadwriter

Re: ~Blamed From Birth~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 01:53:13 AM AEST
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Jenni, this is so sad, but beautifully hopeful in the end. The little
girl in your story was one of the lucky ones, (as ironic as that sounds).
She found purpose. She found love. She found hope and faith.

Beautifully inspirational, hun, but so sad that this is the reality for FAR
too many.

*hugs*

~Breezy

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