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leaving me in devastation
my heart screams in pain for you
the definition of disdain to you
i need to know what you think of me
i need to know if we could be
its hard to believe this is true
i can't seem to get through
can you be so jaded
that love is thought to be over rated
you seem to be wavering with this
so with your uncertainty, i will wait
forever and a day if thats what it takes
i need to know what you think of me
i need to know if we could be
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waiting in the middle

Contributed by redsleeve on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 09:13:29 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

strictly superficial conversation
leaving me in devastation
my heart screams in pain for you
the definition of disdain to you
i need to know what you think of me
i need to know if we could be
its hard to believe this is true
i can't seem to get through
can you be so jaded
that love is thought to be over rated
you seem to be wavering with this
so with your uncertainty, i will wait
forever and a day if thats what it takes
i need to know what you think of me
i need to know if we could be

Copyright © redsleeve ... [ 2008-07-07 09:13:29]
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Re: waiting in the middle (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 10:09:09 AM AEST
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Not bad...kinda nice really.

Keep up the good work.

Re: waiting in the middle (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 02:16:09 PM AEST
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nice write. Sounds like me a few years ago. But don't worry, the answers will come soon. You will learn the truth, and in some way you will move on: whether it be in life with this person, or in life without this person. just remember: don't let this one consume you and your life. Always be yourself: that is how you will truly find love. When you can be your real self around someone, you know love exists. I wish you luck with your situation. And i do like your work of art! Great choices of words.

Keep up the great work!

~sprints

Re: waiting in the middle (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 10:56:49 PM AEST
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nicely done,

never stop searching...until you are sure

wiz

Re: waiting in the middle (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:51:18 AM AEST
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nice - a very emotional write. Unfortuantely I truly understadn this experiance. Good wrtie - thx

Kevin
--the lonely vagabond

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