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Array ( [sid] => 143734 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no girl for me [time] => 2008-07-07 01:50:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => No girl for me.

How come I can't get a girl,
In this unforgiving world?
I'm I really that ugly,
it's really starting to bug me.
So I'm not the greatest guy
so I have told my share of lies.
There has to be someone
who I can live with under the sun.
Don't get me wrong, I've done it all
first kiss, first hug, first date, first call.
But what I really want, is someone I can call mine
someone I can be with and spend a lot of time.
I guess I'll be waiting here in my home,
or maybe I'm suppose to die alone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 32 [informant] => moose2006 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

no girl for me

Contributed by moose2006 on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 01:50:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

No girl for me.

How come I can't get a girl,
In this unforgiving world?
I'm I really that ugly,
it's really starting to bug me.
So I'm not the greatest guy
so I have told my share of lies.
There has to be someone
who I can live with under the sun.
Don't get me wrong, I've done it all
first kiss, first hug, first date, first call.
But what I really want, is someone I can call mine
someone I can be with and spend a lot of time.
I guess I'll be waiting here in my home,
or maybe I'm suppose to die alone.

Copyright © moose2006 ... [ 2008-07-07 01:50:17]
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Re: no girl for me (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 04:42:45 AM AEST
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aww... there is definitely a girl our there for you! You just have to find her, go looking. Be yourself, that is the most important thing. I'm sure you aren't "really that ugly" and you may say you are "not the greatest guy" but you will find that girl who will believe you are the best. You just haven't met her yet. Be patient and what is meant to be yours will come to you. And, yes, it is repetition, but repetition always puts an emphasize on that phrase or thought: Be yourself. You will find what you are looking for. Great poem by the way, well written & full of emotion & wonder. Keep up the great work & i hope u find that girl, you deserve her!

~sprints

Re: no girl for me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 03:40:40 PM AEST
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love...such a basic human need. i can totally relate to this becuz i'm at that point in life rite now, to hav that special girl. anyone can get anyone they want if they hav a positive mentality in their approach (which i really don't possess haha even though i'm telling u this), but there's trillions of girls out there! and i bet someday u'll find the one 4 u. take care
-K.Z.

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