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Array ( [sid] => 143684 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im Ready [time] => 2008-07-04 08:27:59 [hometext] => For Rick you are so very dear to me [bodytext] => Remember when you said I had something to say?
Well i did and still do

What if i was to say i was ready?

You know ready... Im sick of being afraid
of something i shouldnt be afraid of,
Im sick of it

I want to i really do there is no denying it
The only thing stopping me was FEAR

The fear of pain, but i want to
soooo badly, and want to get it over with....my first time
To get the painful part over with,

That's what has been on my mind of late
That's what has me worried a wee bit

But i trust you with all of who i am and
All who im meant to be

You are the only one i wish to tell this secret to
Hoping that you will cherish it like i do
Keeping me alive and on cue, God i love you and want to
Be dear to you, to feel your soft hands that know their way around
To feel your kiss that makes me lose my breath everytime
To see you smile that makes me happy everytime of the day
To hear you songs which are off key but meaningful to me
To see you dance your hillbilly dance that's dorky but cute
To smell your scent that i memorized so very fast
To feel your skin beneath my hand that's soft and warm all year round
To feel you heartbeat under my cheek, which i hope skips a beat
To feel your hair so curly in texture run through my fingers
To hear you voice that never ceases to amaze me, God your so funny
To hear you say that you'll always be faithful and never hurt me and always call
back, even if i dont answer, and even if your weird, your my weirdo and i love
you for who you are, please o please do not change

Gosh Rick do i ever love you

you are more dear to me than an evening star

My Love
My Hope
My Angel [comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 14 [informant] => GreenEves16 [notes] => (Edited by Mod_11 for spelling.) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Im Ready

Contributed by GreenEves16 on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 08:27:59 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Remember when you said I had something to say?
Well i did and still do

What if i was to say i was ready?

You know ready... Im sick of being afraid
of something i shouldnt be afraid of,
Im sick of it

I want to i really do there is no denying it
The only thing stopping me was FEAR

The fear of pain, but i want to
soooo badly, and want to get it over with....my first time
To get the painful part over with,

That's what has been on my mind of late
That's what has me worried a wee bit

But i trust you with all of who i am and
All who im meant to be

You are the only one i wish to tell this secret to
Hoping that you will cherish it like i do
Keeping me alive and on cue, God i love you and want to
Be dear to you, to feel your soft hands that know their way around
To feel your kiss that makes me lose my breath everytime
To see you smile that makes me happy everytime of the day
To hear you songs which are off key but meaningful to me
To see you dance your hillbilly dance that's dorky but cute
To smell your scent that i memorized so very fast
To feel your skin beneath my hand that's soft and warm all year round
To feel you heartbeat under my cheek, which i hope skips a beat
To feel your hair so curly in texture run through my fingers
To hear you voice that never ceases to amaze me, God your so funny
To hear you say that you'll always be faithful and never hurt me and always call
back, even if i dont answer, and even if your weird, your my weirdo and i love
you for who you are, please o please do not change

Gosh Rick do i ever love you

you are more dear to me than an evening star

My Love
My Hope
My Angel

Copyright © GreenEves16 ... [ 2008-07-04 08:27:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Im Ready (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 09:22:47 AM AEST
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You captured moments of love soft and tender in this write. Blessing to you both.

Michelle

Re: Im Ready (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 12:44:04 PM AEST
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A very warm and tender piece.

Thank you for sharing.

Peace

~Shannon

Re: Im Ready (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 5th July 2008 @ 12:24:51 PM AEST
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nicely done,

wiz

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