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joined and bonded by love and knowing that it will never break
to you my love i promise to be true to be honest in our walk till the stars fall my love
i will make you proud to be my wife i will scream to the heavens so they pay attention at our union
i will shake the world my love then after we walk hand in hand forever
we can cuddle and make love under the sky tonight my love
for we are true in heart for we are true in love
till the heavens fall my love
we are getting married on the ocean today barefoot and full of nature
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till the heavens fall

Contributed by lostrelic on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 01:29:25 AM in AEST
Topic: Event

i welcome all of you to the day that my love and i get married
joined and bonded by love and knowing that it will never break
to you my love i promise to be true to be honest in our walk till the stars fall my love
i will make you proud to be my wife i will scream to the heavens so they pay attention at our union
i will shake the world my love then after we walk hand in hand forever
we can cuddle and make love under the sky tonight my love
for we are true in heart for we are true in love
till the heavens fall my love
we are getting married on the ocean today barefoot and full of nature
to friends and family that surround thank you for making me your love

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2008-07-04 01:29:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: till the heavens fall (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 02:23:32 AM AEST
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Tears of joy and love caress my cheeks. A beautiful sentiment on this very special day. Hold her close, in high regard, with respect and dignity and your life together will flourish.

May all the love, joy, peace, and happiness bless your union my friend.

Peace,

~Shannon

Re: till the heavens fall (User Rating: 1 )
by GreenEves16 on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 05:46:09 AM AEST
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very nice poems?

Re: till the heavens fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 09:48:20 AM AEST
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Congratulations to you both.. May you always have that special love shared by two....
Lovely poem..
Jenni

Re: till the heavens fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 10:19:52 AM AEST
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Congrats. I wish you both my best.

You show deep love in your words.

Mike

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