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Array ( [sid] => 143626 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is life [time] => 2008-07-01 14:19:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This is life

Last night,

when you came back,

I could see you were very tired......

Me:

Are you ok?

You:

I had dinner outside.

Don't worry,

I am ok.

Me:

I am sorry you have to traveled back and forth between two families.

You:

Haha, sorry?

The atmosphere in our room is always easy and free.

You:

I need to tell you something now.

I have thought for a long time,

I want to buy a motor tricycle for living.

I have to admit,

I can't seek a better job.

Me:

But you know,

it is a dangerous work.

Don't lose your hope,

keep on trying,

our luck is coming.

You:

It doesn't matter,

I will be careful.

Tell you the truth,

I have seen a nice motor tricycle,

it is a old one,

but it is still very nice,

for four thousand and eight hundred Yuan.

Me:

Ok, if you really like it.

But I need your promise,

I hope you don't come back late.

You:

I know you will worry me.

All is ok,

I promise you now,

I only work by day,

and I will come back early every day.

Me:

When will you start carry out the thing?

You:

Haha, until you give me the ok.

I want to buy it tomorrow morning.

Me:

Thank you for always trying your best for our family.

Remember,

drive carefully.

You:

Really a good story!

Believe me,

I am always soul and heart.

Haha,

beautiful night!

Yes,

when our path is blocked,

it is likely that we have just encountered a grand opportunity.

When the difficult, unexpected challenges arise,

then we truly have a chance to shine.

Don't go through life,

grow through life,

for this is life,

the very life of life......
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This is life

Contributed by holy on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 02:19:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

This is life

Last night,

when you came back,

I could see you were very tired......

Me:

Are you ok?

You:

I had dinner outside.

Don't worry,

I am ok.

Me:

I am sorry you have to traveled back and forth between two families.

You:

Haha, sorry?

The atmosphere in our room is always easy and free.

You:

I need to tell you something now.

I have thought for a long time,

I want to buy a motor tricycle for living.

I have to admit,

I can't seek a better job.

Me:

But you know,

it is a dangerous work.

Don't lose your hope,

keep on trying,

our luck is coming.

You:

It doesn't matter,

I will be careful.

Tell you the truth,

I have seen a nice motor tricycle,

it is a old one,

but it is still very nice,

for four thousand and eight hundred Yuan.

Me:

Ok, if you really like it.

But I need your promise,

I hope you don't come back late.

You:

I know you will worry me.

All is ok,

I promise you now,

I only work by day,

and I will come back early every day.

Me:

When will you start carry out the thing?

You:

Haha, until you give me the ok.

I want to buy it tomorrow morning.

Me:

Thank you for always trying your best for our family.

Remember,

drive carefully.

You:

Really a good story!

Believe me,

I am always soul and heart.

Haha,

beautiful night!

Yes,

when our path is blocked,

it is likely that we have just encountered a grand opportunity.

When the difficult, unexpected challenges arise,

then we truly have a chance to shine.

Don't go through life,

grow through life,

for this is life,

the very life of life......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-07-01 14:19:48]
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Re: This is life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 04:50:55 AM AEST
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I'm begining to see changes in your style, gradual and beautiful.
The last stanza in this one is perfect!

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