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Array ( [sid] => 143622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => striving for an escape [time] => 2008-07-01 12:42:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => have you ever felt like there was no escape
you cant think of anything else to do
you try so hard to find a way out
but pain still finds a way to control you

theres nothing you can really do
it just tears you up inside
life just feels like a road trip
we're all just along for the ride

stuck in this dark, painful shadow
feeling so stuck and trapped
wishing one day things will get better
i cant take anymore of this crap

i wonder if it will ever get better
everyone says they'd break my fall
so many lies and pretending
i just wanna say ***** it and end it all [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 65 [informant] => KY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

striving for an escape

Contributed by KY on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 12:42:51 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

have you ever felt like there was no escape
you cant think of anything else to do
you try so hard to find a way out
but pain still finds a way to control you

theres nothing you can really do
it just tears you up inside
life just feels like a road trip
we're all just along for the ride

stuck in this dark, painful shadow
feeling so stuck and trapped
wishing one day things will get better
i cant take anymore of this crap

i wonder if it will ever get better
everyone says they'd break my fall
so many lies and pretending
i just wanna say ***** it and end it all

Copyright © KY ... [ 2008-07-01 12:42:51]
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Re: striving for an escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:23:44 PM AEST
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WOW!! This is really good... I can feel your pain in this... Hope it gets better.....
Jenni

Re: striving for an escape (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 04:58:05 PM AEST
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Very emotional. I can relate - there are are some really ugly hurtful people, oh but who to turn to or if it matters. But it does. You have some deep thoughts here.

--Kevin
The lonely vagabond

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