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Array ( [sid] => 143617 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Directions For Mr. Sinner [time] => 2008-07-01 09:32:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hey Mr. Sinner,
Seek the untrodden path;
As sinners seldom walk this line.

Follow your heart;
Question it at times,
Never relent upon your way.

Be your own hero,
One on which to rely,
For heroes never let you down.

Hold onto your dreams;
Dream with untold aspirations
And never profess defeat.

Choose your steps wisely;
If you fall off course
A step away it can be found.

Lay down your sins,
If for but a day;
And soon the day will never end. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 490 [topic] => 19 [informant] => wizard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Directions For Mr. Sinner

Contributed by wizard on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 09:32:27 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Hey Mr. Sinner,
Seek the untrodden path;
As sinners seldom walk this line.

Follow your heart;
Question it at times,
Never relent upon your way.

Be your own hero,
One on which to rely,
For heroes never let you down.

Hold onto your dreams;
Dream with untold aspirations
And never profess defeat.

Choose your steps wisely;
If you fall off course
A step away it can be found.

Lay down your sins,
If for but a day;
And soon the day will never end.

Copyright © wizard ... [ 2008-07-01 09:32:27]
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Re: Directions For Mr. Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 10:08:07 PM AEST
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Great write wizard. Such great words to live by.......Mike

Re: Directions For Mr. Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 12:36:18 PM AEST
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Well done, I enjoyed this piece. As Mike said ...
Words to live by.

Peace

~Shannon

Re: Directions For Mr. Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 01:55:26 PM AEST
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this is beautiful!! great write

Re: Directions For Mr. Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 01:48:03 PM AEST
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It grabbed me that in the third line of the first stanza, you say "this" line. To me, choosing to use "this" instead of "that" immediately lets the reader know you are talking of your own personal journey. By the way, you use semicolons (a terrific bit of punctuation when used properly) beautifully.

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