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[sid] => 143614
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Too Young (revised)
[time] => 2008-07-01 07:55:22
[hometext] => Previously posted accidently without being complete, I finished it and here it is
[bodytext] => Waiting, I watch the sun set The stars come out to play I hold my broken heart in hand And cry tears of sorrow Too young I hate those words I hear them daily it seems But to hear you say them Broke me down Too much pain to bear I know I'm young but I'm so mature If you only knew how much I love you Why is it so hard for me to be Who I am? I thought you said "age doesn't matter" Honestly, I thought you cared Standing on the rooftop Of the grain elevator overlooking your home I stare at the front door until, like clockwork, you appear A smile spreads across my face, not happy It's a ruefull smile, full of angst As I pull the trigger Down I fall, Our eyes lock, yours in panic mine in sorrow You run towards my falling form, but it's too late I'm lost in the darkness, your face embedded in my hollow eyes Time goes slow as the ground rushes to meet me I watch you running, your eyes full of tears Calling my name but I can't hear you All I hear is that moment, the moment my heart broke And your voice saying those dreadful words "You're too young for me" [comments] => 4 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 36 [informant] => DesolantDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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