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Array ( [sid] => 143609 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => corridors of blackened souls [time] => 2008-07-01 05:31:12 [hometext] => cowrite Rich/ Michelle aka ingeniousidiot and shelby [bodytext] => Doorways reveal a realm unknown
Unseen to others, unbelievable things I have been shown
A kingdom vast that over countless ages has grown
Becoming more beautiful as storm surges past have blown

Embracing the beauty of the ominous clouds
gathering around me like darkened shrouds
tempting me to the very core
rupturing the soul and all it fought for.

Sorrowful cries echo through cavernous halls
Memories hang upon shadowed castle walls
Searching for its way out, a wandering soul
Talking to no one but shadows upon the ceiling has taken its toll

Through the tears we see only black.
We ramble through hallways of hurt and abuse.
Searching for the moments we lost.
Another doorway dare we go? Or rest in our painted shrouds of dark?

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
corridors of blackened souls

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:31:12 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Doorways reveal a realm unknown
Unseen to others, unbelievable things I have been shown
A kingdom vast that over countless ages has grown
Becoming more beautiful as storm surges past have blown

Embracing the beauty of the ominous clouds
gathering around me like darkened shrouds
tempting me to the very core
rupturing the soul and all it fought for.

Sorrowful cries echo through cavernous halls
Memories hang upon shadowed castle walls
Searching for its way out, a wandering soul
Talking to no one but shadows upon the ceiling has taken its toll

Through the tears we see only black.
We ramble through hallways of hurt and abuse.
Searching for the moments we lost.
Another doorway dare we go? Or rest in our painted shrouds of dark?





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Re: corridors of blackened souls (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:41:35 AM AEST
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I had almost forgotten this one. I think that we were planning on adding more but never got the chance.
Rich


Re: corridors of blackened souls (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:44:51 AM AEST
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Rich,
yes I think you are right. Well we can begin again on another one we finish. I still think this one is good for one of the dark ones we had written, how about you?

Thanks you!
Hugs
Michelle


Re: corridors of blackened souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:48:59 AM AEST
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You two write so well together... congrats on a brilliant piece..
Jenni


Re: corridors of blackened souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 10:15:33 PM AEST
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Brilliant piece of writing, you two. Your flow is unmatched...................Mike


Re: corridors of blackened souls (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 05:58:48 AM AEST
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A great piece the two of you have here. It speaks with great meaning.

Deadwriter




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