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Array ( [sid] => 143572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wolves Too Lonely to Cry [time] => 2008-06-29 13:40:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cars drift by humming
From someplace past
Another soon to pass
No place past I recall
‘cept where rain storms fall
With tides ever pushing
Crowded… no place going
As nature nearby taunts
On pine-wood winds
Whispering in wolf-call howls
…Distant and lonely.

Not all wolves seek social pain
There are those with gray eyes
Who travel distant
The wild call
Of snowbound valleys
Much too gentle for common rumors.

Though,
Nature does not mind
She understands
Sighing as she lies down gently
Her snow silk shawl
Slipping slender from her shoulder
Her hands held out with open arms
Not always gentle
But always there
For wolves too lonely to cry.
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Wolves Too Lonely to Cry

Contributed by wheels on Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 01:40:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Cars drift by humming
From someplace past
Another soon to pass
No place past I recall
‘cept where rain storms fall
With tides ever pushing
Crowded… no place going
As nature nearby taunts
On pine-wood winds
Whispering in wolf-call howls
…Distant and lonely.

Not all wolves seek social pain
There are those with gray eyes
Who travel distant
The wild call
Of snowbound valleys
Much too gentle for common rumors.

Though,
Nature does not mind
She understands
Sighing as she lies down gently
Her snow silk shawl
Slipping slender from her shoulder
Her hands held out with open arms
Not always gentle
But always there
For wolves too lonely to cry.

Copyright Â© wheels ... [ 2008-06-29 13:40:10]
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Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 03:10:08 PM AEST
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Soft and beautiful write I loved it with the wolf in it nice touch.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 04:49:08 PM AEST
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ah oooooooooooooooouuuuu.
As you see, I luv this one.
I even howel at the moon at times.
Beautifull.
huggs, smiles, howels,
emy

Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 05:21:58 AM AEST
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a very powerful expressive write.. lovely

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 07:00:11 AM AEST
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I believe you captured the soul of the "lone wolf" exceptionally well
with this. (Whether intended or not). What a perfectly sad and torturous
line ...

"For wolves too lonely to cry"

I'm just stuck there. It's ... I don't know, just too damn painfully beautiful.
The metaphor in the second stanza is wondrous. Though it pains me to admit
it, you are right.

Sometimes solitude is our only comfort.

Hoping peace finds your heart ~

~Breezy

Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 08:54:06 PM AEST
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Such deep sadness and pain in this piece. Yet written with such wonderful lines. Great write.........Mike

Re: Wolves Too Lonely to Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:05:09 PM AEST
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I can Imagine gray eyes looking to break" we are not always where we want to be. I can imagine their silence, they would leave no evidence in leaving..this is what i`ve taken from your write...way cool. Crow

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