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Tomorrow will be our baby's achievement of month of life,

I am going to work after tomorrow,

but I know you don't hope I go to work early.

I will well prepared for it,

don't worry.

I have a good idea now,

I am going to live in my mother's house with you.

you know,

my office is just under ten minutes to make a round walk from mother's house,

if we live there,

I can feed my milk to our baby better.

Yesterday,

you told me you had make enough money for the party of tomorrow,

I was gald to hear that.

when you come back,

I will tell you my thought.......

I don't hope you are too tired and busy,

please let me bear everything with you,

I am ready,

no matter what you will say.

Look,

our baby is asleep,

maybe he is in his sweet dream.......

All our family said our baby is the model of you,

haha, take a look,

really, really!

I am happy now,

I am kissing him on both cheeks,

I am appreciating his poetic face.

Look,

he is cast in your mold!

Look,

the two silly eyes,

the one funny nose,

the one big mouth,

the lovely face.......

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I have a good idea

Contributed by holy on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:56:21 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I have a good idea

Tomorrow will be our baby's achievement of month of life,

I am going to work after tomorrow,

but I know you don't hope I go to work early.

I will well prepared for it,

don't worry.

I have a good idea now,

I am going to live in my mother's house with you.

you know,

my office is just under ten minutes to make a round walk from mother's house,

if we live there,

I can feed my milk to our baby better.

Yesterday,

you told me you had make enough money for the party of tomorrow,

I was gald to hear that.

when you come back,

I will tell you my thought.......

I don't hope you are too tired and busy,

please let me bear everything with you,

I am ready,

no matter what you will say.

Look,

our baby is asleep,

maybe he is in his sweet dream.......

All our family said our baby is the model of you,

haha, take a look,

really, really!

I am happy now,

I am kissing him on both cheeks,

I am appreciating his poetic face.

Look,

he is cast in your mold!

Look,

the two silly eyes,

the one funny nose,

the one big mouth,

the lovely face.......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-06-28 01:56:21]
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Re: I have a good idea (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 04:43:36 AM AEST
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very nice write

deadwriter

Re: I have a good idea (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 05:55:01 AM AEST
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Awww such a happy write, Holy.. I feel your excitement....I will e-mail you later on this write..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: I have a good idea (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 07:00:06 AM AEST
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a genuine, heartfelt poem for your offspring / spouse. good luck to u and ur family. =)
-K.Z.

Re: I have a good idea (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 11:52:25 PM AEST
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such a beautiful expression of love. . . peace. elle

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