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Array ( [sid] => 143497 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the forest is awaking [time] => 2008-06-25 23:20:31 [hometext] => I love forest poems please rate and please take the time to read [bodytext] => This forest so deep and green the eternal twilight does look mean.

Tall trees of emerald green tower high seeming to touch the night sky.

A fawn picks its way over a tree root while an owl does cry a loud hoot

The stars do shine but you can see none under this sea of endless pine.

These trees grow tall so as to shelter these animals so small.

To them this is home while by night no human does dare roam.

This night so cold whistling through these trees so old the moon shines like white gold.

As a graceful hawk does fly this cold night is beginning to die.

The sun is rising fast the night this night will soon be in the past.

As the golden sun does appear there arises a family of deer.

The forest is waking dawn is breaking.

Please comment [comments] => 2 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 27 [informant] => kelly_may [notes] =>

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the forest is awaking

Contributed by kelly_may on Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 11:20:31 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

This forest so deep and green the eternal twilight does look mean.

Tall trees of emerald green tower high seeming to touch the night sky.

A fawn picks its way over a tree root while an owl does cry a loud hoot

The stars do shine but you can see none under this sea of endless pine.

These trees grow tall so as to shelter these animals so small.

To them this is home while by night no human does dare roam.

This night so cold whistling through these trees so old the moon shines like white gold.

As a graceful hawk does fly this cold night is beginning to die.

The sun is rising fast the night this night will soon be in the past.

As the golden sun does appear there arises a family of deer.

The forest is waking dawn is breaking.

Please comment

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Re: the forest is awaking (User Rating: 1 )
by eternalsunshine on Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 12:20:38 AM AEST
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thanks for taking me on an awesome journey to the forest...;)
great poem, enjoyed it very much...
love, peace and happiness...

Re: the forest is awaking (User Rating: 1 )
by mecatpurrson on Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 05:04:58 AM AEST
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Kelly, you have so many beautiful phrases in your poem, especially "forest so deep and green" and "sea of endless pine." Very nice.

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