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Still not the person you knew.
Alone hidden in the darkness.
Blood dripping down my body.
Tears hitting her grave absorbed in the dirt.
Her body lying 10ft beneath my feet.
Fallen driven into th earth.
Her corpse drying up, trapped in her coffin.
Never will will i be with her.
She went to a place or joy and happiness.
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Fallen

Contributed by Chlois on Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 04:39:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

No longer who i used to be.
Still not the person you knew.
Alone hidden in the darkness.
Blood dripping down my body.
Tears hitting her grave absorbed in the dirt.
Her body lying 10ft beneath my feet.
Fallen driven into th earth.
Her corpse drying up, trapped in her coffin.
Never will will i be with her.
She went to a place or joy and happiness.
My future lies in the pit of fire where no one heres my scream!

Copyright © Chlois ... [ 2008-06-25 16:39:03]
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Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Miseria on Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 03:06:23 AM AEST
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This one was pretty interesting.. Keep it up, I liked it.

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 03:30:02 PM AEST
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It is a very interesting write with such sad remorse. Being left so lonely screaming within the confines of our own desperation. Well written

--Kevin
the lonely vagabond

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by KY on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 11:55:51 AM AEST
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i love it.
im not as creative as you are...
you are am amazing writer

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 10:02:13 PM AEST
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i like this one too. I can't wait to see what you have for Septemeber. Take care

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 11:48:23 PM AEST
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compelling stuff here... maybe someday u two will reunite (if this is non-fiction)

take care

-K.Z.

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