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[aid] => mick
[title] => ~A Burst Bubble~
[time] => 2008-06-24 05:51:10
[hometext] => Trying to deal with a situation in my life..and not doing well....
[bodytext] => ~~^~~
I don’t know how much more I can take,
I’m hoping my decision won’t be a mistake.
Of late, all I feel to do is sit down and cry,
I think the time has come to say goodbye.
Life, for me, now seems so forlorn,
Since all respect for me is gone.
I never thought I would ever hurt this way,
Now I feel the pain is here to stay.
I wish I could correct everything that started the trouble,
But that’s like trying to repair a burst bubble.
I will forever be weak in their eyes,
So maybe the time has come for my goodbyes..
~~^~~
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[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
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[topicname] => selfstruggles
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~A Burst Bubble~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 05:51:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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~~^~~
I don’t know how much more I can take,
I’m hoping my decision won’t be a mistake.
Of late, all I feel to do is sit down and cry,
I think the time has come to say goodbye.
Life, for me, now seems so forlorn,
Since all respect for me is gone.
I never thought I would ever hurt this way,
Now I feel the pain is here to stay.
I wish I could correct everything that started the trouble,
But that’s like trying to repair a burst bubble.
I will forever be weak in their eyes,
So maybe the time has come for my goodbyes..
~~^~~
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Jenni_K
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2008-06-24 05:51:10]
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 06:06:24 AM AEST
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Oh jen,
It hurts for me to see someone do this to you. It's just not right.
I don't know about the laws etc. where you live but here if it were me I'd make sure they respected me once again.
You've given your life to these folks and there has to be a way to resolve this.
I'm here for you any time.
Huggs, luv, prayer,
emy
You know no matter what you do I'll stand behind you.
Oh yea,
good write. |
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 06:42:42 AM AEST
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Jen,
I feel you in this write. I am so sorry all this has gone on with you. I understand how this feels.
I am also behind you all the way and want you to be happy sweety.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 06:42:42 AM AEST
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You and I are probably in about the same place about now. I just hope you are doing better than myself. I cannot belive ive tears left to flow. I sincerly hope you are doing much better than myself. It is a very touching and emotional write.
--So Sincerely Kevin |
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 05:50:39 PM AEST
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| Very deeply written piece Jenni. I hope all works out for you. I know you will make the best decision for you. I wish you only the best in life and am also here for you. I hope that soon the healing will start............Mike |
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 06:11:55 PM AEST
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Very sad to read this Jenni. It is not right what is happening.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 08:01:59 PM AEST
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| I don't know the situation. I don't even know you except for what I read from you here on the site. And everything I have read tells me you are good person. Strength to you Jenni. I wish you the best. |
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by holy on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 01:21:42 AM AEST
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| Dear sister, thank you for taking time for me first. I wish you happiness and luck always, miss you so much. |
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 10:17:27 PM AEST
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Jenni,
I don't know what's wrong...but I pray that it all works out for you.
This is another sad but beautiful write...loaded with emotion.
Take care.
~Stephan |
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Re: ~A Burst Bubble~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 05:46:24 AM AEST
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Hey Sis!
Well, dang, didn't wanna start out with such a funk in yer life but the title brought me to it. Us cowboys would say a bursted bubble. Takes a little o' the sting away. Instead o' goodbye, how 'bout "we'll see ya later." Leaves more options open to ya. Take a break, dear lady, SMILE.
wabl
KenMoore
cowboy |
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