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Array ( [sid] => 143451 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the wish of every goldfish [time] => 2008-06-23 19:58:04 [hometext] => the last to poems including this one have been about my pets i promise not to bore you with any more after this one this ones a bit silly. [bodytext] => Round and Round the same old scene oh what i would give to live in a stream it makes me so sad i could scream.

This life so boaring and dull nothing happens just a constant lull.

I sleep eat and swim around yet sadly to this bowl i am bound.

I dream of spaces wide and free and think what life would be like if that was me.

I sigh sadly and continue to swim around this bowl so dim.

An idea has sparked in my head this is what i must do....... i must pretend to be dead.

My owner sighs and scoops me out and flushes me down the loo without a doubt.

Rushing through pipes and bends oh i do hope this ride soon ends.

Im swimming free out in the sea.

Oh i do bet every fish dose wish they were me.




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the wish of every goldfish

Contributed by kelly_may on Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 07:58:04 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



Round and Round the same old scene oh what i would give to live in a stream it makes me so sad i could scream.

This life so boaring and dull nothing happens just a constant lull.

I sleep eat and swim around yet sadly to this bowl i am bound.

I dream of spaces wide and free and think what life would be like if that was me.

I sigh sadly and continue to swim around this bowl so dim.

An idea has sparked in my head this is what i must do....... i must pretend to be dead.

My owner sighs and scoops me out and flushes me down the loo without a doubt.

Rushing through pipes and bends oh i do hope this ride soon ends.

Im swimming free out in the sea.

Oh i do bet every fish dose wish they were me.








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Re: the wish of every goldfish (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 10:44:58 PM AEST
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Oh I can see how this could be the wish of every goldfish... Enjoyable read...

Jenni

P/S... A suggestion here... you should click on "yes" for spell check when you are posting. That way the Moderators would correct your typos...


Re: the wish of every goldfish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 12:54:06 AM AEST
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i like it we need humorous poetry to keep the hearts up


Re: the wish of every goldfish (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 05:22:09 AM AEST
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LOL this reminds me of Nemo, how cute.
Now I miss my fish I do not have them with me at the moment, though they are in a huge tank *smiles*
Adorable write.

Michelle


Re: the wish of every goldfish (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 01:16:35 PM AEST
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This was very cute, I had a pleasure reading this one :) nice work.


Re: the wish of every goldfish (User Rating: 1 )
by mecatpurrson on Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 05:15:49 AM AEST
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Good one, Kelly. A pleasant read. Your love for animals comes through nicely in all your poems.




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