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Array ( [sid] => 143419 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my dream [time] => 2008-06-22 11:24:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
i saw a dream
where i was feeling like in heaven
i felt as if iam floating
like a leaf in air
a feeling i never felt
and than i saw an angel
she was so butiful
like from a fairy tale
i felt i am in love
i felt i saw d whole world in her butiful eyes
but she was crying
my hrt started beating faster
i asked my angel why are u crying
she looked towards me
and i felt dat as if i have lived my life for her ooooonly
she said she loves me,but she has a curse
i asked d curse
she said i will die if i kisses her
i said i wanna die in her arms kissing her
i wanna die kissing my love
and i kissed her
but nothing happened to me
and my angel fall on my arms
she was no more
she lied to me '
d curse was on me
i felt as my world is no more
and suddenly i woke up
everything was as usual
but i felt as if i have lost somethig [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 40 [informant] => lovely_poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
my dream

Contributed by lovely_poet on Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 11:24:17 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy




i saw a dream
where i was feeling like in heaven
i felt as if iam floating
like a leaf in air
a feeling i never felt
and than i saw an angel
she was so butiful
like from a fairy tale
i felt i am in love
i felt i saw d whole world in her butiful eyes
but she was crying
my hrt started beating faster
i asked my angel why are u crying
she looked towards me
and i felt dat as if i have lived my life for her ooooonly
she said she loves me,but she has a curse
i asked d curse
she said i will die if i kisses her
i said i wanna die in her arms kissing her
i wanna die kissing my love
and i kissed her
but nothing happened to me
and my angel fall on my arms
she was no more
she lied to me '
d curse was on me
i felt as my world is no more
and suddenly i woke up
everything was as usual
but i felt as if i have lost somethig




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Re: my dream (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 09:57:06 AM AEST
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Very beautiful! I love it.


Re: my dream (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 10:26:31 AM AEST
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remarkably gentle & yet also intense. . .




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