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Mike's Bar
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Walkin' meself by the place where Mike's Bar's
place to be this night of rain and cold chill,
I thought I'd have me some jolt that bejars
me gut havin' time now so as might kill.
Mike's a great one seen oft servin' used swill.
He'll lift a man's leavin's very quickly,
pourin' same down drain where pitcher waits till
placed in sight, ugh, lookin' mighty sickly.
Me thinks he's not doin' right thing strictly,
so's to keep away from dirty dealin's,
I'll drink only wine that pours out thickly,
minding right well me own tender feelin's.
Me ship sails at mornin' tide to Dover.
She's a fine ship carryin' name The Rover.
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2003-03-15 10:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mike's Bar
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfflow on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 04:21:50 PM AEST (User
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i love this, the style of it is so entertaining |
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Re: Mike's Bar
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 12:56:41 AM AEST (User
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This must be very difficult to write like this ... and I enjoyed it immensely. .. Jan |
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Re: Mike's Bar
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:17:59 PM AEST (User
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i read the series completely backwards. lol. it was very enjoyable though. it really must take lots of work to write like this! thanks for sharing. |
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