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Yet eyes and mouth have become blind and dumb
With a prick to the finger crimson letters begin to flow
With knowledge and wisdom what exactly does this mind know

Pain and regret like a coat that cant be hung at the entry gate
Hanging heavily around the neck, for repentance and remorse it might be too late
For the ashen pages taped upon the wall tell the recent tale
Of attempts at rekindling an ancient feud but time after time seem to fail

Satan and his bride whisper into wounded ear
Hoping that their lies the hardened heart will hear
With a pistol in one hand and a deafening sound ringing in your head
One last thought escapes you as you take your last breath, you’re dead

2008
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Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath

Contributed by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 08:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Upon ashen pages waiting for words to come
Yet eyes and mouth have become blind and dumb
With a prick to the finger crimson letters begin to flow
With knowledge and wisdom what exactly does this mind know

Pain and regret like a coat that cant be hung at the entry gate
Hanging heavily around the neck, for repentance and remorse it might be too late
For the ashen pages taped upon the wall tell the recent tale
Of attempts at rekindling an ancient feud but time after time seem to fail

Satan and his bride whisper into wounded ear
Hoping that their lies the hardened heart will hear
With a pistol in one hand and a deafening sound ringing in your head
One last thought escapes you as you take your last breath, you’re dead

2008

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Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 03:36:08 AM AEST
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Rich,
once again the pain and the words are breaking my heart. Please do not do this.

Pain and regret like a coat that cant be hung at the entry gate........ I feel the same way right now.

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Michelle

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Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 04:21:03 AM AEST
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WOOOOW dude,
I hope you are writing feelings out and are not gonna act on this. Do not do it.
Reck

Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 09:48:39 PM AEST
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Yet again your writing amazes me. Simple, definate words that ring loud and clear. Welcome to my yard, where you MUST hang your coat at the gate, We are all equal here.

Your Friend,
Deadwriter

Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 05:53:06 AM AEST
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This is so sad and heart breaking... I hope things are better for you soon...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Final Words Said, Now Take Your Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by safetyinnumbers on Saturday, 21st June 2008 @ 05:57:21 PM AEST
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Nice write....I enjoyed it....Anthony

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