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When you are in love
You think everything is perfect
And at the time this may be so
But when you lose that love
Everything goes wrong

You hate your life
You ask why? Why me?
But you never find that answer
Believe me

Eventually suicide feels like that answer
And it gets even worse when see
This so called love again
Not in your life, in someone else’s
You remember all the memories
And feel even worse

You try to take your life
You try a belt
You try a knife
But this poem is to those who did not succeed
Suicide is not the answer
I found a friend that helped me through it
And now my life is better
People do care
People do love you
And there always is one person
That would die without you

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Love=Suicide

Contributed by Anonymous44 on Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 07:04:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Love = Suicide

When you are in love
You think everything is perfect
And at the time this may be so
But when you lose that love
Everything goes wrong

You hate your life
You ask why? Why me?
But you never find that answer
Believe me

Eventually suicide feels like that answer
And it gets even worse when see
This so called love again
Not in your life, in someone else’s
You remember all the memories
And feel even worse

You try to take your life
You try a belt
You try a knife
But this poem is to those who did not succeed
Suicide is not the answer
I found a friend that helped me through it
And now my life is better
People do care
People do love you
And there always is one person
That would die without you

Copyright Â© Anonymous44 ... [ 2008-06-18 07:04:41]
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Re: Love=Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 07:24:53 AM AEST
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Once again I am left with such a sad feeling. I feel you in this write. I grew a bit happy towards the end when I read suicide is not the answer, Bravo for that one! Throw your shoulders back, dust off, march on.
I know it is hard to do but you can.

Hugs

Michelle

Re: Love=Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 07:39:32 AM AEST
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yes..great message here..there is in fact "always one person that wouldn die without you." how true that is..

Re: Love=Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by ratty on Wednesday, 2nd July 2008 @ 12:54:20 PM AEST
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Loved the last 2 lines.....Great write!

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