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Array ( [sid] => 143299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Enjoy ourselves [time] => 2008-06-17 20:39:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Enjoy ourselves



"Coming, coming!"

I jumped to my feet as soon as I was sent for,

I could also hear the bangs from the fireworks.

That your presence made me very happy,

when you were beside me,

down my face run the tears......



We took leave of my mother,

we got on the car,

you smiled,

"Do you regret?"

I gestured to you that it was time to go,

you lightly touched my face and said,

"Let us go?"



Our wedding was very simple and ceremonious,

our wedding brought your parents radiance,

"Hurry along there, please,

there are many people waiting behind you."

I had the distinct impression that I was pushed,

I had to hold your hand......



There were undertones of relief as the visitors left,

it was getting very late.

After we said good night to our parents,

we went to our own bedroom,

"The pink wall sets off the yellow furniture,

the room is well decorated."

I said to you with a light heart......



"May I ask you a question?"

"What?"



"Why, why did you cry this morning?"

"It is nice and warm today, isn't it?"



"If you regret, I will sent you to see your mother, haha......"

"I want to go home with you tomorrow, haha......"



"You'd better look sharp or you will be late,

After tonight......"

"??????"



On the night of our wedding,

You delighted me with your performance,

I was very pleased.

On the night of our wedding,

we enjoyed ourselves and had good time,

I will never forget that wonderful night......











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Enjoy ourselves

Contributed by holy on Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 08:39:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Enjoy ourselves



"Coming, coming!"

I jumped to my feet as soon as I was sent for,

I could also hear the bangs from the fireworks.

That your presence made me very happy,

when you were beside me,

down my face run the tears......



We took leave of my mother,

we got on the car,

you smiled,

"Do you regret?"

I gestured to you that it was time to go,

you lightly touched my face and said,

"Let us go?"



Our wedding was very simple and ceremonious,

our wedding brought your parents radiance,

"Hurry along there, please,

there are many people waiting behind you."

I had the distinct impression that I was pushed,

I had to hold your hand......



There were undertones of relief as the visitors left,

it was getting very late.

After we said good night to our parents,

we went to our own bedroom,

"The pink wall sets off the yellow furniture,

the room is well decorated."

I said to you with a light heart......



"May I ask you a question?"

"What?"



"Why, why did you cry this morning?"

"It is nice and warm today, isn't it?"



"If you regret, I will sent you to see your mother, haha......"

"I want to go home with you tomorrow, haha......"



"You'd better look sharp or you will be late,

After tonight......"

"??????"



On the night of our wedding,

You delighted me with your performance,

I was very pleased.

On the night of our wedding,

we enjoyed ourselves and had good time,

I will never forget that wonderful night......











XXX




Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-06-17 20:39:15]
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Re: Enjoy ourselves (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 09:08:18 PM AEST
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Woo Girl, I am trying NOT to imagine the night.......Nice write...
Your Big sis
Jenni


Re: Enjoy ourselves (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 01:43:22 AM AEST
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You write with a cute flair.
Reck


Re: Enjoy ourselves (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 02:38:03 AM AEST
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This was well written...different from most styles and I like the dialouge you put within this poem...

Well done
Christina




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