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Array ( [sid] => 143276 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How Time Flies [time] => 2008-06-16 23:29:10 [hometext] => Speak it aloud - Listen to the timing, rhyming and rythmn. Advanced Critique Encouraged. [bodytext] => Time is always passing
Passing by so fast
Each and every second
Further from our grasp.

The moments of the past
Just seconds ago perhaps
Stretch into a distant
Chasm in the mind.

The future we wish to find
A distant dream that makes us blind
So close, but beyond our clasp
Time, it seems, goes by too fast.

Time is always pressing
Pressing in our minds
To ignore the life we call a grind
And this, it seems, is what makes us blind.

And the times, we find
Once gone, are forever left behind. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 43 [informant] => MTJohnson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

How Time Flies

Contributed by MTJohnson on Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 11:29:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Time is always passing
Passing by so fast
Each and every second
Further from our grasp.

The moments of the past
Just seconds ago perhaps
Stretch into a distant
Chasm in the mind.

The future we wish to find
A distant dream that makes us blind
So close, but beyond our clasp
Time, it seems, goes by too fast.

Time is always pressing
Pressing in our minds
To ignore the life we call a grind
And this, it seems, is what makes us blind.

And the times, we find
Once gone, are forever left behind.

Copyright © MTJohnson ... [ 2008-06-16 23:29:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: How Time Flies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 01:16:33 AM AEST
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a very true poem i like it but i'm sorry i can't give much critique

Re: How Time Flies (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 01:45:14 AM AEST
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I also am not good at hard core critique sorry I just do not do it lol.

I do however love this poem. It flows well. I always love the subject of time.

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