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Array ( [sid] => 143262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => seed of life [time] => 2008-06-16 08:44:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I close my eyes
and enter deep
to the realms of life
that is hidden within me....

I travel in silence
through the tunnels of life,
like rivers high and low
down pouring
and up through my spine

the sun that rise
gently through my heart
opening the gateway
of eternal love...

it is beauty
like the summer breeze
where flowers unite
joining as one
to call upon the day

where aromas of their leaf
lifted by the breeze
dancing in circles
to catch our day...

to show us
how perfect everything is,
to love one another
that is their only wish...

i enter a world
thats larger than life
through my unconscious
i open the seed of life... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 21 [informant] => eternalsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

seed of life

Contributed by eternalsunshine on Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 08:44:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I close my eyes
and enter deep
to the realms of life
that is hidden within me....

I travel in silence
through the tunnels of life,
like rivers high and low
down pouring
and up through my spine

the sun that rise
gently through my heart
opening the gateway
of eternal love...

it is beauty
like the summer breeze
where flowers unite
joining as one
to call upon the day

where aromas of their leaf
lifted by the breeze
dancing in circles
to catch our day...

to show us
how perfect everything is,
to love one another
that is their only wish...

i enter a world
thats larger than life
through my unconscious
i open the seed of life...

Copyright © eternalsunshine ... [ 2008-06-16 08:44:04]
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Re: seed of life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 09:26:03 AM AEST
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A very beautifull, well constructed, deep, write.
Huggs,
emy

Re: seed of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 09:47:04 AM AEST
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very nice

Re: seed of life (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 09:02:24 AM AEST
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WOW! There is much more here than the surface reveals. Correct me if I am wrong, but Passionate, a touch of the erotic with overtones of love and the final note of life. Of the beauty within shared with another. IT is a beautiful and wonderful write with wonderful imagery and poetic conservation, while getting across the meaning in a manner that leaves it to the reader to make it their own as they see it. I love this piece even if I am not completely correct. Thx

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