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Array ( [sid] => 143209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MONTHLY DUE [time] => 2008-06-14 03:47:15 [hometext] => JUST A MORNIN STAR.... [bodytext] => my mind wades back
to almost nine yrs in hope
where i dreamt mostly of love
a sinking me in a lovely hand

by the end of each month
i find my self payin dues
i mean heavy duty dues
its not my fault i went out wit you

no one can hold me from our glitter
of love hope and joy
the bright sun will always shine
please 4giv me i cldnt be ur fool

i know you luved me
i know you cared
but how come evry month
i payhard earned monthly dues

dont give me dat impression
you a very charmin lady
money is not ur problem
but stilll i pay monthly dues. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 54 [informant] => accurate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

MONTHLY DUE

Contributed by accurate on Saturday, 14th June 2008 @ 03:47:15 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

my mind wades back
to almost nine yrs in hope
where i dreamt mostly of love
a sinking me in a lovely hand

by the end of each month
i find my self payin dues
i mean heavy duty dues
its not my fault i went out wit you

no one can hold me from our glitter
of love hope and joy
the bright sun will always shine
please 4giv me i cldnt be ur fool

i know you luved me
i know you cared
but how come evry month
i payhard earned monthly dues

dont give me dat impression
you a very charmin lady
money is not ur problem
but stilll i pay monthly dues.

Copyright © accurate ... [ 2008-06-14 03:47:15]
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Re: MONTHLY DUE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 14th June 2008 @ 05:19:39 AM AEST
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You have written a lovely poem with a sweetness to it.
The only thing that bothers me a bit with it is the fact of the slang, it detracts from the write.
4giv cldnt ur for a few examples. To me it has its place but not in such a beautiful poem.

Nice write

Michelle

Re: MONTHLY DUE (User Rating: 1 )
by accurate on Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 03:25:36 AM AEST
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cool poem, i luv the rythm in it
but try 2 follow the rules k. nice poem.

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