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It was on May Day morning,

our factory had a trip.

On the way returned,

the bus had an accident,

my left cheek hurt.



The following evening,

you came to see me,

I told you about the story,

you listened to me quietly.



"Do you feel better now?"

you asked me with a concern.

"I am ok,

but photograpy badly,

isn't it?"

I smiled.



"Take it easy,

you will get well soon."

you placed your hand on my shoulder comfortably

"But it is a serious matter for you,

here now."

I pretended to pull a face,

and gave you a naughty look.



"Serious my foot,

why should you worry?"

suddenly,

you kissed my left cheek gently,

"Now, now, take it easy."



When I looked at you again,

you were in a silence.

I could guess,

you were not too sure if that was right,

but for me,

it was really a new surprise,

because it was the first I had your kiss......






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The first time(*-*)(*-*)

Contributed by holy on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 11:37:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The first time(*-*)(*-*)



It was on May Day morning,

our factory had a trip.

On the way returned,

the bus had an accident,

my left cheek hurt.



The following evening,

you came to see me,

I told you about the story,

you listened to me quietly.



"Do you feel better now?"

you asked me with a concern.

"I am ok,

but photograpy badly,

isn't it?"

I smiled.



"Take it easy,

you will get well soon."

you placed your hand on my shoulder comfortably

"But it is a serious matter for you,

here now."

I pretended to pull a face,

and gave you a naughty look.



"Serious my foot,

why should you worry?"

suddenly,

you kissed my left cheek gently,

"Now, now, take it easy."



When I looked at you again,

you were in a silence.

I could guess,

you were not too sure if that was right,

but for me,

it was really a new surprise,

because it was the first I had your kiss......










Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-06-11 11:37:26]
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Re: The first time(*-*)(*-*) (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 02:58:10 PM AEST
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This is a gentle and kind hearted moment caught in time. I liked it.

~Me~


Re: The first time(*-*)(*-*) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 03:51:54 PM AEST
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Oh Holy...such a sweet write.. we never forget our first kiss, do we....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: The first time(*-*)(*-*) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 03:43:57 AM AEST
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Holy my friend, again you wrote another adorable poem. I must agree the first kiss ahhhhhhh.

Hugs to ya

Michelle




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