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Array ( [sid] => 143130 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the mistakes i made while fate hands me a rose [time] => 2008-06-11 09:38:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The love in my life has been dormant for ten years or more
wondering the lands caring for others forgetting myself
never finding only lust but you can not dream of that
hoping for human touch but backing away all the same
years wondering where you are my one love the only one who cared
at a time now in my life the emptiness was starting to darken me
my blood cold my feelings none but so alone crying in my soul
from one city to another the same sad face walked down many desolate roads
your memories were like a ghost whispering you name in the dark
you touch i feel your eyes i am still lost your love never ending
then i find you

you are close to close to keep me calm to close to touch
you tell me you never stopped loving you talked about me for years you couldn't get over
me to my love forever in your arms
we have walked many different roads over the years the fear of disappointment frightens my soul
when we met there was turmoil every one was against our love
it tore us apart and my jealousy was childlike but i have grown since that kid first laid eyes on you
i will be with you soon i hope you have taken care of my heart i only gave it to you
not many people get a second chance at lost love i wont make this mistake twice [comments] => 3 [counter] => 352 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
the mistakes i made while fate hands me a rose

Contributed by lostrelic on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 09:38:17 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



The love in my life has been dormant for ten years or more
wondering the lands caring for others forgetting myself
never finding only lust but you can not dream of that
hoping for human touch but backing away all the same
years wondering where you are my one love the only one who cared
at a time now in my life the emptiness was starting to darken me
my blood cold my feelings none but so alone crying in my soul
from one city to another the same sad face walked down many desolate roads
your memories were like a ghost whispering you name in the dark
you touch i feel your eyes i am still lost your love never ending
then i find you

you are close to close to keep me calm to close to touch
you tell me you never stopped loving you talked about me for years you couldn't get over
me to my love forever in your arms
we have walked many different roads over the years the fear of disappointment frightens my soul
when we met there was turmoil every one was against our love
it tore us apart and my jealousy was childlike but i have grown since that kid first laid eyes on you
i will be with you soon i hope you have taken care of my heart i only gave it to you
not many people get a second chance at lost love i wont make this mistake twice




Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2008-06-11 09:38:17]
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Re: the mistakes i made while fate hands me a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Supercreep on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 05:51:47 PM AEST
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Early nostalgic. Bravo!


Re: the mistakes i made while fate hands me a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Supercreep on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 05:52:34 PM AEST
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oops meant eerily nostalgic. Really should learn to spell I guess. :)




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