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No You in Heartbroken
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 01:54:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Though you believe they'll hold the key to her heart
What words will you say, where could they be found
Are there sentences that would carry Cupid's dart
All you know is there is no life without her around
What would you possibly say to help her understand
That Us only happens because our love is not wrong
And you'd give her the universe to hold in her hand
Yet only with her at your side could you be so strong
So where are those words that will spark love's flame
You know your heart can't take losing the one for you
Will you say a heart full of agony is empty just the same
That without her, your world is so cold, lonely and blue
Silently you pray that she's not really walking away
Holding back tears stabs more sorrow into your heart
Though you've been hurt so many times before today
That too familiar pain returns anew watching her part
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reprobate
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2008-06-11 01:54:47]
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Re: No You in Heartbroken
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 03:28:59 AM AEST
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Painfully beautiful. I do not know how to put that without it sounding tacky lol.
So where are those words that will spark loves flame
I loved that line......... This is deeply moving and deep soul stuff here.....
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: No You in Heartbroken
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 06:59:33 PM AEST
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from title to last line it is flowing and just so
beautifully sad.......... excellent write, it made my
breath catch..............
hugs n' love nessa |
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