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Array ( [sid] => 143075 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Brown Eyed Angel [time] => 2008-06-09 05:54:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Deep eyes of brown
Pools of eternity
Into which i spiral down
As I stare endlessly
When our eyes meet
My thoughts unwind
Seeking to retreat
Into my own mind
Too intense, too much for me
Inside I'm spent, Too soon to be
Swimming in your eyes
And time seems to fly
Yet not fast enough
As every day I cry
Waiting for the day
When we can finally
Be in eachothers arms
And bask in one anothers charms
Holding you tight
As your eyes see mine
And the world takes flight
As we begin to decline
Falling into each other
Sinking deep in your soul
I begin to smother
Understanding the toll
To give myself completely
As I found in you, uniquely
A talent to reprieve me
And a need to accept me
Please dont ever take
your eyes away from me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Thirten [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Brown Eyed Angel

Contributed by Thirten on Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 05:54:04 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Deep eyes of brown
Pools of eternity
Into which i spiral down
As I stare endlessly
When our eyes meet
My thoughts unwind
Seeking to retreat
Into my own mind
Too intense, too much for me
Inside I'm spent, Too soon to be
Swimming in your eyes
And time seems to fly
Yet not fast enough
As every day I cry
Waiting for the day
When we can finally
Be in eachothers arms
And bask in one anothers charms
Holding you tight
As your eyes see mine
And the world takes flight
As we begin to decline
Falling into each other
Sinking deep in your soul
I begin to smother
Understanding the toll
To give myself completely
As I found in you, uniquely
A talent to reprieve me
And a need to accept me
Please dont ever take
your eyes away from me




Copyright © Thirten ... [ 2008-06-09 05:54:04]
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Re: Brown Eyed Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 06:13:05 AM AEST
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The song Brown eyed girl came to mind while reading this.

A lovely write, sinking deep within your soul I like that line!

Michelle


Re: Brown Eyed Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 04:15:58 AM AEST
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Great write! I liked it.
-The Unforgivable Saint


Re: Brown Eyed Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 04:33:30 AM AEST
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Nicely written..some lines are particularly beautiful - pools of eternity into which I spiral down..




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