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Array ( [sid] => 14302 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => broken promises [time] => 2003-03-14 18:00:00 [hometext] => To you, my best friend.
[bodytext] => When two are two there is no pain,
To bridge a gap is a wondrous thing,
Why must what you say be words in vain?
Why cant you let your heart dance and sing?

What ill another has done is their to claim,
Upon another there should be no blame.
When a heart's in pain should it lash out in hurt,
Should everything be under thine feet as the dirt.

Silence is supposed to be a treat,
For much is laughter in our meet,
No matter what you choose to say,
Your actions are the proof everyday.

Extending and holding you in love,
Look not at promises from above,
Start with you to heal the pain,
Lest for thy pain thou goest insane.

Where would you take your mind,
Within -- thine own games you will find,
Take this love, please, for thee let it shine,
And relish all those whom to you are kind.

Sit in the silence and dare to feel,
That which makes you dare to be real,
no visions of rainbows in the skies above
Broken Promises come from a broken love.
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broken promises

Contributed by kolbrun on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

When two are two there is no pain,
To bridge a gap is a wondrous thing,
Why must what you say be words in vain?
Why cant you let your heart dance and sing?

What ill another has done is their to claim,
Upon another there should be no blame.
When a heart's in pain should it lash out in hurt,
Should everything be under thine feet as the dirt.

Silence is supposed to be a treat,
For much is laughter in our meet,
No matter what you choose to say,
Your actions are the proof everyday.

Extending and holding you in love,
Look not at promises from above,
Start with you to heal the pain,
Lest for thy pain thou goest insane.

Where would you take your mind,
Within -- thine own games you will find,
Take this love, please, for thee let it shine,
And relish all those whom to you are kind.

Sit in the silence and dare to feel,
That which makes you dare to be real,
no visions of rainbows in the skies above
Broken Promises come from a broken love.

Copyright Â© kolbrun ... [ 2003-03-14 18:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: broken promises (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 04:37:42 AM AEST
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A bright poem. speaks the truths in the concluding lines. Good write. venkat

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 1 )
by kangarose on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 04:22:30 AM AEST
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so true... great write.... may have felt the curse of a broken promis and a boken heart

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 1 )
by kangarose on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 04:22:41 AM AEST
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so true... great write.... many have felt the curse of a broken promis and a boken heart

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 1 )
by ke on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:14:41 AM AEST
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This was beautiful, Kolbrun...brought back a lot of memories...
KE

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:16:37 AM AEST
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I always find your poetry so interesting...another good one from you...

your friend Sylvía

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:18:33 AM AEST
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loved this so much! You never fail to amaze me .

yours Ocen

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 01:26:35 AM AEST
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Your writing shows that you have insight into human behavior.. and perhapa have done alot of soul searching. Very good piece, kolbrun. Bizzy 'Clean is beautiful!'

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 1 )
by venus86 on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:14:35 AM AEST
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dont be frightened Kolbrún, just go with it....
A moving piece, so typical of your lovely work.

elly xx

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 1 )
by venus86 on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:16:24 AM AEST
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I'm with elly ..........go with the flow........ Otherwise you'll never know. I much prefer to try, (even if I fail)....rather than to look back and wish I had. I loved you poem..... uncertainty and excitement...a magical mix.

yours XXX

Re: broken promises (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:24:06 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, i particuarly love these two lines,"Sit in the silence and dare to feel,
That which makes you dare to be real,"
have read this several times and feel i got more each time, hugs n' love nessa

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