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Array ( [sid] => 142994 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little One [time] => 2008-06-06 00:41:34 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after spending time with my little God daughter, she was only a month old and I kept her over for a few hours and this is what I was feeling during her stay. [bodytext] => As I hold you in my arms how I wish you were mine.
If I was your mother I could never see you cry.
I would hold you and cradle you until you feel peace.
I could'nt imagine complaining about not getting sleep.
It would be a joy to feed you and change your diaper too.
I would'nt care as, long as I'am close to you.
In the mean time I'll ask God for a child of my own. Let's go now
little one it's time to take you home. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 48 [informant] => reeree [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Little One

Contributed by reeree on Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 12:41:34 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As I hold you in my arms how I wish you were mine.
If I was your mother I could never see you cry.
I would hold you and cradle you until you feel peace.
I could'nt imagine complaining about not getting sleep.
It would be a joy to feed you and change your diaper too.
I would'nt care as, long as I'am close to you.
In the mean time I'll ask God for a child of my own. Let's go now
little one it's time to take you home.

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Re: Little One (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 01:46:02 AM AEST
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you have found the sweetest joy. . ! thanks for the reminder. peace. elle

Re: Little One (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 02:06:39 AM AEST
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Oh..I can truly identify with this... Such a lovely write.. You will have your own some day I hope...
Welcome to YPDC...Looking forward to more of your work..
Jenni

Re: Little One (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 03:49:28 AM AEST
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aww...that's all i can say. it's funny how i did a baby project in high school and my baby was a sack of potatoes, and i would carry it with me everywhere, and for some odd reason, i felt like a proud daddy during that project, and i bet you will be a happy, proud mom someday if you wanted to. take care

Re: Little One (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 07:13:57 AM AEST
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It is a special gift to be a God Parent. I relate to each word. Beautiful write. Have fun with that little one.

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