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Array ( [sid] => 142979 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Tough Time [time] => 2008-06-05 08:19:57 [hometext] => this is about a conversation me and my fiancee had and I feel bad about the words that followed...I'm sorry [bodytext] => My girl called me up late last night
She started talkin
I knew something wasnt right
Talking turned into a rant
About how she hates my job in the Corps
And if she could handle this anymore
So with a tear in my eye
I told her from the bottom of my heart
I love you and I never want to be apart
But if you decide to call it quits
Give up and leave me behind
Then dont come back , you're gone from my mind
You'll have broken my heart into two
And I wont ever want to see you
Without you in my life
I will have to meaning to carry on
You make me feel like I actually belong
Ive been burned twice before
A third time would break my very core
I cant live in a world that drops me on my face
All I ever wanted was to fall into place
You are my one and only
Who I want to raise a family with
And bring about God's greatest gift
After you there is no one else to lighten my heart
Please dont put out this flame and tear us apart [comments] => 1 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 24 [informant] => tundrahydra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
A Tough Time

Contributed by tundrahydra on Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 08:19:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



My girl called me up late last night
She started talkin
I knew something wasnt right
Talking turned into a rant
About how she hates my job in the Corps
And if she could handle this anymore
So with a tear in my eye
I told her from the bottom of my heart
I love you and I never want to be apart
But if you decide to call it quits
Give up and leave me behind
Then dont come back , you're gone from my mind
You'll have broken my heart into two
And I wont ever want to see you
Without you in my life
I will have to meaning to carry on
You make me feel like I actually belong
Ive been burned twice before
A third time would break my very core
I cant live in a world that drops me on my face
All I ever wanted was to fall into place
You are my one and only
Who I want to raise a family with
And bring about God's greatest gift
After you there is no one else to lighten my heart
Please dont put out this flame and tear us apart




Copyright © tundrahydra ... [ 2008-06-05 08:19:57]
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Re: A Tough Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Eclipse_of_the_Moon on Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 07:59:06 AM AEST
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I'm sorry about what I said....I'm sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you that way.

I love you with with my heart and soul. you are my one and only love from now till the end of time




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