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Array ( [sid] => 142934 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Tears [time] => 2008-06-04 01:36:20 [hometext] => for the record, im not trying to persuade you to hate the harsh world, but maybe youve expressed yourself in some way about it. maybe you can relate to this poem, and please excuse my diction. [bodytext] => I entered this world in tears,
just like all newborns did,
having sprung forth, exposed
to the vices of those
who make life a living hell.
To the Prince! Our souls we sell.

I deal with this world in tears,
just like the depressed do,
all in tears of sadness
and none of happiness.
I can’t help but be ***** off
‘cause the world is full of crap.

I will leave this world in tears,
but with a smile on my face,
hoping to end up somewhere,
anywhere, far from this place.
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In Tears

Contributed by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 01:36:20 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I entered this world in tears,
just like all newborns did,
having sprung forth, exposed
to the vices of those
who make life a living hell.
To the Prince! Our souls we sell.

I deal with this world in tears,
just like the depressed do,
all in tears of sadness
and none of happiness.
I can’t help but be ***** off
‘cause the world is full of crap.

I will leave this world in tears,
but with a smile on my face,
hoping to end up somewhere,
anywhere, far from this place.

Copyright Â© Ambivalence ... [ 2008-06-04 01:36:20]
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Re: In Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Bubbles02 on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:22:00 AM AEST
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Such a sad write. But I liked it. And I'm sure people can relate to this. I know I can. Great job.

Re: In Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 12:12:04 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. It's very well thought out, rather than just a lot of whining, which this kind of sad poetry so often is. You actually had something to say, and took time to say it right.

I like that last stanza so much, if this poem were in a book, I might underline it.

Well done.

- A

Re: In Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by safetyinnumbers on Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 06:32:26 PM AEST
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It's a sad reality we live in at times.....nature of this world....I thought you captured this well in this poem....Safetyinnumbers

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