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Array ( [sid] => 142910 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The fires getting closer there is no way out [time] => 2008-06-03 02:22:41 [hometext] => this is a random poem, I dont know what to think about it so let me know what you think thanks it helps me to write better [bodytext] => Fire all around me, I can’t get out
I can’t move forward there are blazes in my face
I can’t turn back now that path’s been erased
Stuck in the middle, stuck in a rhyme
Afraid of tomorrow and running out of time
Screaming for help but they all seem to be blind
Looking past what I can’t see, will I ever be free
The fires getting closer there is no way out
I will just lay down now to tired to try anymore
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The fires getting closer there is no way out

Contributed by blackrose233 on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 02:22:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Fire all around me, I can’t get out
I can’t move forward there are blazes in my face
I can’t turn back now that path’s been erased
Stuck in the middle, stuck in a rhyme
Afraid of tomorrow and running out of time
Screaming for help but they all seem to be blind
Looking past what I can’t see, will I ever be free
The fires getting closer there is no way out
I will just lay down now to tired to try anymore

Copyright Â© blackrose233 ... [ 2008-06-03 02:22:41]
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Re: The fires getting closer there is no way out (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 08:04:04 AM AEST
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There is something about the fire and flame and being stuck that is so intense in this write.
The question will I ever be free....... incredible thought provoking write you have here. Keep up the good work I will stop by to read.

Michelle

Re: The fires getting closer there is no way out (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 09:30:27 AM AEST
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Amazing analogy....You have just described my life!!

Jenni

Re: The fires getting closer there is no way out (User Rating: 1 )
by dummie on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 10:15:55 AM AEST
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this is a good use of metaphor.

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