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Array ( [sid] => 142907 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alice in Acid Land [time] => 2008-06-03 01:46:47 [hometext] => (mental trip) [bodytext] => She feels the wind
ripping her apart
he calls it "so beautiful to die."
and darkness falls.

Wondering, where did time go
and who was she before?
Can you help me, over there?
Discover who I am?

And what did you do to me?
Pale skinned man, handing me
paper to slip on my tongue.
It settles in for hours.

Feeling disillusioned, misinformed
as if she were falling?Fading?Awakening?
It's all too beautiful and hilariously so
Now I know where they all go...

...in wonderland [comments] => 5 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Inevitable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Alice in Acid Land

Contributed by Inevitable on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 01:46:47 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

She feels the wind
ripping her apart
he calls it "so beautiful to die."
and darkness falls.

Wondering, where did time go
and who was she before?
Can you help me, over there?
Discover who I am?

And what did you do to me?
Pale skinned man, handing me
paper to slip on my tongue.
It settles in for hours.

Feeling disillusioned, misinformed
as if she were falling?Fading?Awakening?
It's all too beautiful and hilariously so
Now I know where they all go...

...in wonderland

Copyright © Inevitable ... [ 2008-06-03 01:46:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Alice in Acid Land (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 01:57:27 AM AEST
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I liked it...a unique twist on the classic story...I liked the title and everything about it...good job.

Rich

Re: Alice in Acid Land (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 01:46:25 AM AEST
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LOL the title caught me right away. It is nice to see uplifting and refreshing writes on the pages here .

I liked the theme of this. Nicely done.

Michelle

who will withhold a story of long ago LOL

Re: Alice in Acid Land (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 04:29:08 AM AEST
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this is so cool and so creative. i love it!

Re: Alice in Acid Land (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 02:00:57 AM AEST
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wala & tada. . . I love it. elle

Re: Alice in Acid Land (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 10th June 2009 @ 08:16:45 AM AEST
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another nice dreamy piece, good stuff.

-Phil

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