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Array ( [sid] => 142895 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hurt rejoiced [time] => 2008-06-02 13:59:18 [hometext] => a hurt rejoiced [bodytext] => Immortalized those moments
the sand, the water and your touch
the breeze striking happy notes
music rhyming souls within
how much I wished it didn't end
the hearts so smiling and the water sparkling
never before did nature
seep into me so well
I loved myself more than ever earlier
something hurt me and that was
when you called it fun
while I was living a life
for you it was just another day
and me, I flew into the skies
I melted, I gave away
still I believe
no matter what earth delights
to feel my bare feet
and winds do long to play with my hair
I rejoice, I am here
by God's grace I value the hours
I relish the time
I thank Him abound! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 14 [informant] => jkjo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

hurt rejoiced

Contributed by jkjo on Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 01:59:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Immortalized those moments
the sand, the water and your touch
the breeze striking happy notes
music rhyming souls within
how much I wished it didn't end
the hearts so smiling and the water sparkling
never before did nature
seep into me so well
I loved myself more than ever earlier
something hurt me and that was
when you called it fun
while I was living a life
for you it was just another day
and me, I flew into the skies
I melted, I gave away
still I believe
no matter what earth delights
to feel my bare feet
and winds do long to play with my hair
I rejoice, I am here
by God's grace I value the hours
I relish the time
I thank Him abound!

Copyright © jkjo ... [ 2008-06-02 13:59:18]
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Re: hurt rejoiced (User Rating: 1 )
by socko008 on Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 06:08:23 PM AEST
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I like this, i feel likeit would be easier to read if there were punctuation though. Good images and word usage.

Re: hurt rejoiced (User Rating: 1 )
by jkjo on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 03:37:22 AM AEST
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Thank you for the appreciation and the suggestion..next time I will do that .

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