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You think me foolish, naive

Well honey, hold on

This might hurt a little

I've still got tricks up my sleeve

The naive little girl doesn't live here,

She never did

I just let her get on stage once in a while

That's me waiting behind the wall

You think you know everything

Quiet dear, there's a lot of me you never took the time to see

The woman inside is stronger than you know

I let you inside my world

But you can't follow the rules

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Move Over

Contributed by karoody on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Yeah, I saw the way you looked at me

You think me foolish, naive

Well honey, hold on

This might hurt a little

I've still got tricks up my sleeve

The naive little girl doesn't live here,

She never did

I just let her get on stage once in a while

That's me waiting behind the wall

You think you know everything

Quiet dear, there's a lot of me you never took the time to see

The woman inside is stronger than you know

I let you inside my world

But you can't follow the rules

So I must show you the door.

Copyright © karoody ... [ 2003-03-14 13:40:00]
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Re: Move Over (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 04:18:25 PM AEST
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great strength in your words...
rosie

Re: Move Over (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 04:18:33 PM AEST
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great strength in your words...
rosie

Re: Move Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 06:05:45 PM AEST
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WAY TO GO, GRRL!!!.... Great write...
Jenni

Re: Move Over (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 08:57:04 PM AEST
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Very strong your soul u bare in this one. I found the stage part a bit confusing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Move Over (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 11:34:56 PM AEST
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when i refer to the stage, i am speaking of wearing a mask. it's a cheap trick, but if someone takes cheap shots....eye for an eye.

Re: Move Over (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 02:45:03 AM AEST
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yea, this is also wise act, Beware there are thieves and hynas who can even steal the innocent laughs of children.. who can just wear the masks of guardian angels to enter into others dream worlds.. venkat

Re: Move Over (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 03:25:46 AM AEST
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excellent excellent excellent, right it out girlfriend!!!...

Re: Move Over (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 11:12:19 PM AEST
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nice job venting kara, poems written in a mood can be so interesting when you read them at a later date, my favorite line of yours is,"Quiet dear, there's a lot of me you never took the time to see", hugs n' love to you and yours, always nessa

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