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[title] => Your Sun will always shine
[time] => 2008-05-31 15:35:11
[hometext] => I just went on vaction and we were going to a magic show after a storm when somethng happened...
[bodytext] => I was sitting the backseat of the car looking out the window after the storm. I had just talked to my girlfriend and we were having some real problems. I began questioning our relationship. So, of course, the last thing I wanted to do was drive around to go see a magic show. But...then I saw something that almost made well cease to breath. For one it was beautiful and second it was soo erriely related to the problem I was going through. The clouds had formed over the sun as they usually do after a storm and yet, despite them being some of the darkest clouds I have ever seen, most of the sun rays made their way through the clouds. I mean I've seen this plenty of times but, just think about it. The sun is millions of miles away yet it can go straight through even the darkest of clouds. Even if it can't make it through the clouds eventully the sun will shine bright and hard. So what I'm saying is that even when we think that dark cloud has completely enveloped us and the only thing left to do is let go and give up; our sun is still trying to shine.
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Your Sun will always shine
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roddy
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Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 03:35:11 PM in AEST
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I was sitting the backseat of the car looking out the window after the storm. I had just talked to my girlfriend and we were having some real problems. I began questioning our relationship. So, of course, the last thing I wanted to do was drive around to go see a magic show. But...then I saw something that almost made well cease to breath. For one it was beautiful and second it was soo erriely related to the problem I was going through. The clouds had formed over the sun as they usually do after a storm and yet, despite them being some of the darkest clouds I have ever seen, most of the sun rays made their way through the clouds. I mean I've seen this plenty of times but, just think about it. The sun is millions of miles away yet it can go straight through even the darkest of clouds. Even if it can't make it through the clouds eventully the sun will shine bright and hard. So what I'm saying is that even when we think that dark cloud has completely enveloped us and the only thing left to do is let go and give up; our sun is still trying to shine.
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Re: Your Sun will always shine
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 03:48:35 PM AEST
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Great writing.
The sun is always shinning.
Awesome message.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Your Sun will always shine
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by shelby on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 04:11:26 PM AEST
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Bravo!!!!!! I loved this. You are so right. I also liked the nature involvement in it. I think we are on same brain wave tonight. We must always reach for hope, how true how true. The sun is shining here tonight thanks my friend for that.
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