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Array ( [sid] => 142747 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => live [time] => 2008-05-28 17:57:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Death to god and my mortal soul

I say this loud
cause if I thought it, God would know

I believe in him, cuz I said so
I believe in evil too

I believe most of you are
And I don't care

cuz there's no heaven
and there's no hell

when you're gone
you are gone

Not in black
Just a connection
Front to the back

Death to Society and my physical being
I hate this place
Cuz I learned you
Hate me
Cuz I seem free
But dumb ***
I'm just trying to see
further than you
Want to look

What?

Was I a priest, a petifile
A king, a murderer
Was I a couch or teacher
That took advantage of the situation

What?
Was I?
A dying vessal from the first breath
Why yes,
light and dark on every form

You make what you do
I tell you this I know I'm not the one

EVIL [comments] => 3 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 21 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

live

Contributed by rhei76 on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 05:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Death to god and my mortal soul

I say this loud
cause if I thought it, God would know

I believe in him, cuz I said so
I believe in evil too

I believe most of you are
And I don't care

cuz there's no heaven
and there's no hell

when you're gone
you are gone

Not in black
Just a connection
Front to the back

Death to Society and my physical being
I hate this place
Cuz I learned you
Hate me
Cuz I seem free
But dumb ***
I'm just trying to see
further than you
Want to look

What?

Was I a priest, a petifile
A king, a murderer
Was I a couch or teacher
That took advantage of the situation

What?
Was I?
A dying vessal from the first breath
Why yes,
light and dark on every form

You make what you do
I tell you this I know I'm not the one

EVIL

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2008-05-28 17:57:16]
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Re: live (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 06:11:20 PM AEST
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Black is the port that home this ship.
Death to the one who wrote this ****.
Gallows have been formed on each and every shore, to deliever the score that was earned this dawn.
-live boy, for the last minute before sunrise. Til your death momentarily arrives. live, it will be over before you realize.-

Re: live (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 03:12:45 AM AEST
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I'm not sure if you want comments on this but I really liked it, your writing style is very unique. Keep up the god work

Re: live (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 05:04:57 AM AEST
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I definitely agree with what you said. Great poem!!

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