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Array ( [sid] => 142746 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled, unsung [time] => 2008-05-28 16:18:51 [hometext] => spat, spat, stable, spit [bodytext] => I don't know what it means
or if it means anything at all

I don't have a page
And I don't have a song

I try to hum
but I just fall

I ask why
but you can't hear my thoughts

You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder where it could go

Then I let it go
Turn, and wonder if you really know

All my words are second hand
it's all been said before

I wish you would understand
I'm wierd, cuz each day I want you more

You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me a dirty little whore
And I wonder where we can go

Then I let it go
Turn and wonder if you really know

I'm a fake
My lines
They shade many eyes
And I ask
Do they tell you my

secret

I'm all alone
needing a soul

could it be you?
could it be you?

Then I let it go
Turn, cuz I'm scared you know

I'm really no one

I just stare at the stars

And try to hum

A song from life times learned

"All my friends are dead and gone
Left me here with this song
Nothing else to ******* do
But wait just for you"

*****I*SPACE*****

All my words are second hand
It's all been said before

I just wish
I could tell you more

**************

You look at me
And you see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder if you will stay
Long enough
For me to show you
I am real

You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder if you feel

Why I'm trying to be steel .................. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 33 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

untitled, unsung

Contributed by rhei76 on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 04:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I don't know what it means
or if it means anything at all

I don't have a page
And I don't have a song

I try to hum
but I just fall

I ask why
but you can't hear my thoughts

You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder where it could go

Then I let it go
Turn, and wonder if you really know

All my words are second hand
it's all been said before

I wish you would understand
I'm wierd, cuz each day I want you more

You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me a dirty little whore
And I wonder where we can go

Then I let it go
Turn and wonder if you really know

I'm a fake
My lines
They shade many eyes
And I ask
Do they tell you my

secret

I'm all alone
needing a soul

could it be you?
could it be you?

Then I let it go
Turn, cuz I'm scared you know

I'm really no one

I just stare at the stars

And try to hum

A song from life times learned

"All my friends are dead and gone
Left me here with this song
Nothing else to ******* do
But wait just for you"

*****I*SPACE*****

All my words are second hand
It's all been said before

I just wish
I could tell you more

**************

You look at me
And you see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder if you will stay
Long enough
For me to show you
I am real

You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder if you feel

Why I'm trying to be steel ..................

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2008-05-28 16:18:51]
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Re: untitled, unsung (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 03:16:16 AM AEST
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This was wonderful , it's sad no on commented on it. Well I am first then!! I love your style :)

Re: untitled, unsung (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 09:34:29 AM AEST
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This write is creation at it's best.
It jus reaches out and grabs you in the very first word. Awesome, friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy

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