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Array ( [sid] => 142738 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => On a cool morning in autumn [time] => 2008-05-28 11:44:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => On a cool morning in autumn

On a cool morning in autumn,

you took me to a beautiful orchard,

that was a nice orchard of your friend,

the friend invited you to share his fruits.

the fruit trees were planted in a mountain plain,

we had good time with your friends.

we walked and talked on the way to field,

you asked me if I was tired.

"I wanted you to carry, really tired!"

I said it in joke.

I hardly expected to see you outspreading arms,

I suddenly felt very shy,

"I am joking,

it has been a pleasure to have you,

I like the feeling to be along with you."

"Ah, I really love the place!"

A delicious odor greeted me,

I held your hand forward,

"I am so glad."

"look, your friends are waving to you!"

I called out when I saw your friends across the field,

then murmured,

"I never knew there are so many friends."

"do you feel strange?"

you smiled.

"No, no, that is ok.

A friend in the market is better than money in the chest."

I blushed.

"How come you dislike to make friend?"

that was a very question you had asked me.

"Haha, maybe because I have a drab personality.

You know,

I like reading and writing,

there isn't nearly enough time to me,

and I like to be alone and quiet."

I steered clear of the stones ahead and said.

After you met your friends,

you took me walking to the apple orchard.

you put a beautiful flower in my hair,

"Beautiful! pretty beautiful!"

I saw you gathering some delicious apples and put them in a heart shape,

I ask you why not to put them in two heart,

you held my body tight in your arms and said,

"we are soul mate,

we are infused with new hope,

no one can part us now,

don't you think so?"

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On a cool morning in autumn

Contributed by holy on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 11:44:30 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

On a cool morning in autumn

On a cool morning in autumn,

you took me to a beautiful orchard,

that was a nice orchard of your friend,

the friend invited you to share his fruits.

the fruit trees were planted in a mountain plain,

we had good time with your friends.

we walked and talked on the way to field,

you asked me if I was tired.

"I wanted you to carry, really tired!"

I said it in joke.

I hardly expected to see you outspreading arms,

I suddenly felt very shy,

"I am joking,

it has been a pleasure to have you,

I like the feeling to be along with you."

"Ah, I really love the place!"

A delicious odor greeted me,

I held your hand forward,

"I am so glad."

"look, your friends are waving to you!"

I called out when I saw your friends across the field,

then murmured,

"I never knew there are so many friends."

"do you feel strange?"

you smiled.

"No, no, that is ok.

A friend in the market is better than money in the chest."

I blushed.

"How come you dislike to make friend?"

that was a very question you had asked me.

"Haha, maybe because I have a drab personality.

You know,

I like reading and writing,

there isn't nearly enough time to me,

and I like to be alone and quiet."

I steered clear of the stones ahead and said.

After you met your friends,

you took me walking to the apple orchard.

you put a beautiful flower in my hair,

"Beautiful! pretty beautiful!"

I saw you gathering some delicious apples and put them in a heart shape,

I ask you why not to put them in two heart,

you held my body tight in your arms and said,

"we are soul mate,

we are infused with new hope,

no one can part us now,

don't you think so?"

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-28 11:44:30]
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Re: On a cool morning in autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 05:45:34 AM AEST
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Very beautifully done!

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