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Array ( [sid] => 142721 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Leaving Soon [time] => 2008-05-28 02:43:03 [hometext] => Trying to enjoy the little things in these last few days before I move away [bodytext] => Rain is falling gently
As fog engulfs the trees
I’m lost in the beauty
And as my heart grieves

I did not expect this from them all
But I try and take comfort in what little I can
Like in a cool refreshing rainfall
Your life you cannot plan

I don't have long to stay
Drops of rain are balancing on blades of grass
There is no blue sky today
The world’s covered in a lens of grey glass

The sky’s a blanket of billowy clouds
I’ll have to say good-bye soon
And as night slowly enshrouds
I really miss the moon

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Leaving Soon

Contributed by Muinanyere on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 02:43:03 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Rain is falling gently
As fog engulfs the trees
I’m lost in the beauty
And as my heart grieves

I did not expect this from them all
But I try and take comfort in what little I can
Like in a cool refreshing rainfall
Your life you cannot plan

I don't have long to stay
Drops of rain are balancing on blades of grass
There is no blue sky today
The world’s covered in a lens of grey glass

The sky’s a blanket of billowy clouds
I’ll have to say good-bye soon
And as night slowly enshrouds
I really miss the moon

Copyright Â© Muinanyere ... [ 2008-05-28 02:43:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Leaving Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 10:20:24 AM AEST
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A very lovely poem....with good visuals..
Jenni

Re: Leaving Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by KatsMeow on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 11:25:39 AM AEST
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Lovely poem, sounds like you are not really ready to go. But try to think of it as an adventure, and perhaps the moon will be smiling down!

Re: Leaving Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 02:39:10 PM AEST
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I feel your heart in this one. It is hard to go sometimes. This coming from the adventure woman lol..... Yes look at it as an adventure and the moon will be back hun.

Pm me if needed

hugs

Michelle

Re: Leaving Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 05:06:31 PM AEST
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Beautifully spoken with a dark speeding voice headed to earth.
NO, no leaving
the impact brings life.
More people, like me, to hear
how they feel in a better sound.

Girl completly, My Respect.

Re: Leaving Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 09:40:28 PM AEST
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A very sad write indeed. Moving can be quite difficult.

Deadwriter

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