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Array ( [sid] => 142618 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Chose me [time] => 2008-05-24 05:43:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I held you when you cried
Wiped your tears away and said it's alright
I shared your pain where she did not
Holding your hand, staying by your side through the tough times
She said her appologies and walked away

I laughed with you, so hard you cried
Shared stories, I know your darkest secrets
I stayed nights with you, helping you play that silly video game
Together we beat it in two days with very little sleep
She said it was a waste of time and she was too busy

I smiled as you told me how much you loved her
Said my "I'm happy for you"'s and patted your back
Kept my broken heart to myself, I didn't want to burden you
Your happiness is all I want, forget my own discomfort and pain
She said that I was a bother anyway, and that I was just in the way

I couldn't stop myself from crying after getting home
Something in me broke as I watched you pulled the ring from your pants pocket
The little shred of hope inside me died that day, the day my fate was sealed
I faultered but regained my composure as she threw her arms around your neck
She said with a smirk toward me "Glad you didn't choose her" [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 32 [informant] => desolantdreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Chose me

Contributed by desolantdreamer on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:43:21 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I held you when you cried
Wiped your tears away and said it's alright
I shared your pain where she did not
Holding your hand, staying by your side through the tough times
She said her appologies and walked away

I laughed with you, so hard you cried
Shared stories, I know your darkest secrets
I stayed nights with you, helping you play that silly video game
Together we beat it in two days with very little sleep
She said it was a waste of time and she was too busy

I smiled as you told me how much you loved her
Said my "I'm happy for you"'s and patted your back
Kept my broken heart to myself, I didn't want to burden you
Your happiness is all I want, forget my own discomfort and pain
She said that I was a bother anyway, and that I was just in the way

I couldn't stop myself from crying after getting home
Something in me broke as I watched you pulled the ring from your pants pocket
The little shred of hope inside me died that day, the day my fate was sealed
I faultered but regained my composure as she threw her arms around your neck
She said with a smirk toward me "Glad you didn't choose her"




Copyright © desolantdreamer ... [ 2008-05-24 05:43:21]
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Re: Chose me (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:49:42 AM AEST
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Without the marriage proposal this is very similar to what happened to me, that last line made me so angry (not at you but for you, and for myself). This is a really good poem, I'm sorry she's like that to you. If you ever need anyone to talk to I'm here for you (even though you don't know me). Keep writing you're really good.


Re: Chose me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:51:54 AM AEST
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Awww..this is so heartbreaking...but so nicely written. You have displayed such an unselfish love here...the sign of true love....
Jenni




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