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Array ( [sid] => 142605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2008-05-23 14:11:45 [hometext] => hating life and everything in it ... [bodytext] =>

Losing everyone I care about
Losing the pieces in my heart
Everyone is telling me get out
Everyone is taking a part

Dying but still alive
Without any will to survive
Hell has unleashed its fury
Hit me hard and pulling me in slowly

Nothing makes any sense
Life is getting intense
I try hard to hang on
But it’s a mistake I'm born

Leaving sounds so easy
Death looks so cheesy
My soul’s already dead
My body’s hanging by the thread

Got thrown out of the heart
Even though I am smart
I failed in life
Pain will cut me like a knife

Faking smiles and looking happy is my disguise
Hiding is very unwise
I want to be who I really am
I hate living a scam … [comments] => 4 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 8 [informant] => alibof10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )

Lost

Contributed by alibof10 on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 02:11:45 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

Losing everyone I care about
Losing the pieces in my heart
Everyone is telling me get out
Everyone is taking a part

Dying but still alive
Without any will to survive
Hell has unleashed its fury
Hit me hard and pulling me in slowly

Nothing makes any sense
Life is getting intense
I try hard to hang on
But it’s a mistake I'm born

Leaving sounds so easy
Death looks so cheesy
My soul’s already dead
My body’s hanging by the thread

Got thrown out of the heart
Even though I am smart
I failed in life
Pain will cut me like a knife

Faking smiles and looking happy is my disguise
Hiding is very unwise
I want to be who I really am
I hate living a scam …

Copyright Â© alibof10 ... [ 2008-05-23 14:11:45]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 02:25:56 PM AEST
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This is awesome writing. Do like I do write to live.
I know life's not easy but if you are that down then you only have one way to go and that's up.

Here's a hand.
Write, write, write till one day you realize you are being who you was meant to be a good writer.

huggs, smiles, prayer, peace, hope, joy,
emy

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:13:26 AM AEST
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This was amazing...It is something how many people feel just as you do but dont know how to put their thoughts into words.
I know how you feel for I have spent a large part of my life feeling just as you do.

Christina

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:36:37 AM AEST
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This as brilliant...it was very deep and heart felt..we all have been here at one point in our lives...Keep on writing..it sometimes helps with the pain...keep up the good work

Rich

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 06:11:02 AM AEST
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This is so painfully written, very well done. Good write.

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