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who lived out in the desert in a blistering cactus patch.
Living on a ranch with animals all around
sage brush, cactus and wild animals could be found.

Now the rain rarely fell on that desert floor,
but when the thunder rolled she was ready for a show.
Rain drops falling down, off she would go
streaking across her yard with barely a stitch of clothes.

Who would see maybe the horses or the goats.
Rain is rain and it is much to hot with to many clothes.
Not much traffic on that dusty dirt road
the tree's would sing with the wind as the rain on skin teased.

Now someone asked the other day
where oh where did she go?
She is a city girl now
and when it rains she must wear her clothes!

Her legend still lives on.......... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 54 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

Reneck Raindancer

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 11:48:58 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Now rumor has it there was a young lass
who lived out in the desert in a blistering cactus patch.
Living on a ranch with animals all around
sage brush, cactus and wild animals could be found.

Now the rain rarely fell on that desert floor,
but when the thunder rolled she was ready for a show.
Rain drops falling down, off she would go
streaking across her yard with barely a stitch of clothes.

Who would see maybe the horses or the goats.
Rain is rain and it is much to hot with to many clothes.
Not much traffic on that dusty dirt road
the tree's would sing with the wind as the rain on skin teased.

Now someone asked the other day
where oh where did she go?
She is a city girl now
and when it rains she must wear her clothes!

Her legend still lives on..........

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-05-23 11:48:58]
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Re: Reneck Raindancer (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 11:59:15 AM AEST
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HAHA......Michelle, Beautifully constructed.....and i say,I must agree 100% in the post. You always post great writings.......gave me grin. Hope all is fine. Good here, been sick.but hey, I bounce back. So wheres the trucking bring you now.! When, in Texas let me know.Would love to say hey!

Brew~ aka Dayna

Re: Reneck Raindancer (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:14:04 PM AEST
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I can only imagene.
good write, my friend.
In Washington State she'll have plenty rain to dance in but I suppose you can always impervise.
hugg, smiles,
emy

Re: Reneck Raindancer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:43:28 PM AEST
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LOL...this is so cute.....
Thanks for the smiles....I can also imagine..but I wont....lol.
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Reneck Raindancer (User Rating: 1 )
by safetyinnumbers on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 01:49:08 PM AEST
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Nice write....I like the atmosphere it created. It would be great to have some of that rain my way....in Australia....we're going through a drought.....It's winter here at the moment, but would be great to see some decent rain : )

Re: Reneck Raindancer (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 09:37:22 PM AEST
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The rain does some magical things. Great write.

Deadwriter

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