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Array ( [sid] => 142597 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~ [time] => 2008-05-23 10:15:51 [hometext] => Be mine tonight, he said to her as he laid her on a bed of flowers. [bodytext] => ~~xXx~~

She sat under the thatched-roof hut,
Peering at the moon through the palms.
Love in her eyes, her man at her side,
Her body wrapped in his arms.
She enjoyed looking at the gentle waves,
As they crept up to the shores.
Music playing, their bodies swaying,
She’s with the man she adores..

Under the beautiful moonlit sky,
They listened to the music so sweet.
It wasn’t very long before,
They were both on their feet.
Their bodies as close as close can be
As they danced the night away.
She whispered softly in his ear-
“Right here is where I want to stay”.

He looked into her eyes and smiled,
Squeezed her hands and held her tight,
Kissed her softly on the lips,
And told her everything would be all right.
Let us enjoy what we have right now,
‘Cause tomorrow may not be ours.
Be mine tonight, he said to her
As he laid her on a bed of flowers.

And there on the beach that moonlit night
Their bodies, they did surrender.
And straight into the following day
They made love, oh so tender.
He pledged his love for her once more,
And she did the same right there,
They both agreed, and they were right,
They were the perfect pair!

~~xXx~~
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~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 10:15:51 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

~~xXx~~

She sat under the thatched-roof hut,
Peering at the moon through the palms.
Love in her eyes, her man at her side,
Her body wrapped in his arms.
She enjoyed looking at the gentle waves,
As they crept up to the shores.
Music playing, their bodies swaying,
She’s with the man she adores..

Under the beautiful moonlit sky,
They listened to the music so sweet.
It wasn’t very long before,
They were both on their feet.
Their bodies as close as close can be
As they danced the night away.
She whispered softly in his ear-
“Right here is where I want to stay”.

He looked into her eyes and smiled,
Squeezed her hands and held her tight,
Kissed her softly on the lips,
And told her everything would be all right.
Let us enjoy what we have right now,
‘Cause tomorrow may not be ours.
Be mine tonight, he said to her
As he laid her on a bed of flowers.

And there on the beach that moonlit night
Their bodies, they did surrender.
And straight into the following day
They made love, oh so tender.
He pledged his love for her once more,
And she did the same right there,
They both agreed, and they were right,
They were the perfect pair!

~~xXx~~

Copyright Â© Jenni_K ... [ 2008-05-23 10:15:51]
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Re: ~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 10:45:50 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful, soft air of love in this write.
Delightful, sensual, adorable awwwwwwww

Michelle

Re: ~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~ (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:06:01 PM AEST
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WOw this was a great write. I could invision everything as I was reading it. So much passion and love and trust between two people. Great work. Keep them coming..

MaJ

Re: ~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:07:44 PM AEST
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How sweet and romantic.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: ~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:44:03 PM AEST
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Jen, this is such a beautifully romantic picture you've painted. I can picture every line and what a worderful feeling it gave me. Thx.

Mike

Re: ~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 09:18:24 PM AEST
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I am always blown away by your writes of passion. They are such beautiful pieces.

Deadwriter

Re: ~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 08:12:36 AM AEST
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Brilliant yet warm, vivid enough to close one's eyes and drift away, along with the
tide, magnifcent jenn . . .

thank you also for your read . . .

Ben

Re: ~Under The Beautiful Moonlit Sky~ (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 01:08:20 AM AEST
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Beautiful and romantic, there are many wonderful feelings for everybody to expect, for many people to wait, good job.

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