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I show my all to the faceless crowd
Witnesses of my struggles,
my love and my hurts
Judge and jury
of my hidden agenda’s

You share my life
without knowing my name
lift me up
when I try to hide in shame

If you show me yours
I’ll show you mine
We applaud each others words
and say that all’ be fine

Names come and names go
the database never stops to grow
words does not end after page one
thats only where each journey begun

Together we each hold our passion
inside a world a selective few know
so many reads, so few comment
not realising how encouragement grow

With this I salute my friends in the cyber-poetry-world
and I lift my glass to each one
with a battle of words we struggle along
a battle shared is already half won.

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When I write…

Contributed by SilverRain on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:19:37 AM in AEST
Topic: poets

When I write
I show my all to the faceless crowd
Witnesses of my struggles,
my love and my hurts
Judge and jury
of my hidden agenda’s

You share my life
without knowing my name
lift me up
when I try to hide in shame

If you show me yours
I’ll show you mine
We applaud each others words
and say that all’ be fine

Names come and names go
the database never stops to grow
words does not end after page one
thats only where each journey begun

Together we each hold our passion
inside a world a selective few know
so many reads, so few comment
not realising how encouragement grow

With this I salute my friends in the cyber-poetry-world
and I lift my glass to each one
with a battle of words we struggle along
a battle shared is already half won.

Copyright Â© SilverRain ... [ 2008-05-23 00:19:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When I write… (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 01:43:41 AM AEST
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wicked awsome

Re: When I write… (User Rating: 1 )
by Arijadna77 on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 02:42:25 AM AEST
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hey,im smiling,while reading,and trust me,i had a really bad day.one of "those".

Re: When I write… (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 03:39:17 AM AEST
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Superb job here. I know myself that I read many and fail to come up with an intelligent comment to say. I thank you for posting your works along with everyone that posts here. I am glad you all are here.

Deadwriter

Re: When I write… (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 06:07:52 AM AEST
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How true you are.
Nice write

MIchelle

Re: When I write… (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 10:58:36 AM AEST
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Like Deadwriter, I often feel that my comments never do justice to poems that I read... and for this I apologise...
This write really says so much. As writers we all need some encouragement and sharing our poems gives us the opportunity. Your last two lines speak volumes.. Thank you..
Jenni

Re: When I write… (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 01:33:04 PM AEST
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Great write and thank you. Totally agree with deadwriter and Jenni. Thanks for sharing..........Mike

Re: When I write… (User Rating: 1 )
by HaleysHeresat on Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 11:13:18 PM AEST
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two lines that i really enjoyed:
"I show my all to the faceless crowd" and
"a battle shared is already half won"

Some powerful stuff going on in this poem.

Very nice :)

HaleysHeresat

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